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Beneath his palm; above her quickening pulse- a hardened jewel. Though the tender pulsing of her beating heart- his treasure.
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2018 8:42pm
Passion and complicity. I love essentiality. Well done. J
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23rd Sep 2018 8:44pm
Thought it was about his chief crown jewel before I saw the pic and realised the hardened jewel was her nipple.
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23rd Sep 2018 8:51pm
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23rd Sep 2018 9:12pm
Stunning poem, Pandora. The heart of the one you love is indeed a precious jewel.
Well done!
Well done!
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23rd Sep 2018 9:49pm
covers all tenderness
ur hardness
and heart against a palpitation
imagined below
real imagery here
metaphorically you show
heart beats and his does apparently blow
can't be a one sided show
ur hardness
and heart against a palpitation
imagined below
real imagery here
metaphorically you show
heart beats and his does apparently blow
can't be a one sided show
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23rd Sep 2018 10:45pm
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23rd Sep 2018 10:53pm
Such a lovely image, hand cupping a loved ones bosom whilst feeling the gentle flutters of their heart. Beautiful poem, capturing love and tenderness in so few words.
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