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waiting for it
the years are
a gun barrel
pointed at
my head
the hours
are a bullet
everyday is
Russian
Roulette
sooner or
later...
sooner
or
later
(c) 2018 R.R. Zinn
Published 19th Sep 2018
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19th Sep 2018 7:37am
dark's alright
can see light
at the end of the tunnel...
meanwhile, the cat wants her ears scritced... Damn, if you ain't one inspiring poet.! Thanks, B-kitty, Ely
can see light
at the end of the tunnel...
meanwhile, the cat wants her ears scritced... Damn, if you ain't one inspiring poet.! Thanks, B-kitty, Ely
19th Sep 2018 11:08am
19th Sep 2018 6:00pm
Indeed you do not... but the gunbarrel has two ends... as does the tunnel... We'll leave a lamp on for when you arrive. Nice write B-kitty,
well done... Ely
well done... Ely
19th Sep 2018 3:28pm
19th Sep 2018 3:57pm
WOW! Thank you so much. You have made my day.
As far as talent goes...it simply trusting yourself to be painfully honest w/ yourself and connecting that to the world around you. The important part is not to give up, find your own voice and perspective and keep writing, keep writing, keep writing. Don't let anyone tell you that you cant.
buddhakitty.
As far as talent goes...it simply trusting yourself to be painfully honest w/ yourself and connecting that to the world around you. The important part is not to give up, find your own voice and perspective and keep writing, keep writing, keep writing. Don't let anyone tell you that you cant.
buddhakitty.
19th Sep 2018 7:23pm
Thank you for that advice, I needed to hear it. I'm definitely going to make an effort to read more of your work :)
19th Sep 2018 11:42pm
