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Leakage
Many things could shock me
one of them is roof leaking
I mistook it had been over
until the night I opened the door
found a water puddle on the floor
“The ceiling is dripping,” I screamed
Watching the little stream
coming down the beam
apparently not at all a dream
It’s one of the life disasters
just can’t expect any better
It should be gone in a second
can’t wait over this weekend
The nightmare wends its way
through nights and days
and seems no way to delay
Nonstop drip-drops going down
ignoring my belated frown
with wars of the Three Kingdoms
I should have learned Kong Ming’s wisdom
one of them is roof leaking
I mistook it had been over
until the night I opened the door
found a water puddle on the floor
“The ceiling is dripping,” I screamed
Watching the little stream
coming down the beam
apparently not at all a dream
It’s one of the life disasters
just can’t expect any better
It should be gone in a second
can’t wait over this weekend
The nightmare wends its way
through nights and days
and seems no way to delay
Nonstop drip-drops going down
ignoring my belated frown
with wars of the Three Kingdoms
I should have learned Kong Ming’s wisdom
Author's Note
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Re. Leakage
Anonymous
15th Sep 2018 3:41am
My Sweet Rose.......a lot of people are leaking with you.......I hope it gets better for you and your struggle is over soon......you have a strong soul......keep the strength within you flaming.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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15th Sep 2018 4:59am
Oh you're just always with me when I need my dear friend...thank you, I feel much better!
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Leakage
15th Sep 2018 3:42am
Poe would be proud...the maddening drip of Chinese water torture....and the puddles abound
love it
Jeff
love it
Jeff
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15th Sep 2018 4:58am
Re. Leakage
15th Sep 2018 4:46am
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15th Sep 2018 4:52am
Thank you my dear friend. I feel much better now through your words :)
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Leakage
Brava JasmineB taking your plight as literal, as one who lives in an older home with pipes that leak all the time I empathize with this piece.
Figuratively, I have been leaking tears quite a bit myself thinking on the state of this world. But people like you and many others of our poetry guild prove there are still good people found on this blue marble.
Figuratively, I have been leaking tears quite a bit myself thinking on the state of this world. But people like you and many others of our poetry guild prove there are still good people found on this blue marble.
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"I have been leaking tears quite a bit myself thinking on the state of this world." I love this sentence Bob. The imperfection of this world helps us think deeper, doesn't it? Glad I have you guys around. Your words are really helpful my dear friend.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
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15th Sep 2018 10:42pm
By the way, I haven't been leaking tea as I originally wrote, although that would be a novel skill 😁 Your picture looks like my ceiling 😀
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16th Sep 2018 5:30am
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15th Sep 2018 9:11am
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Re: Re. Leakage
15th Sep 2018 9:43pm
Glad you thought it's a good poem my dear friend. Your comment made my day.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
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15th Sep 2018 11:20am
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15th Sep 2018 9:39pm
Thank you my dear friend for the nice feedback. Your words made me smile...
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
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15th Sep 2018 4:17pm
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15th Sep 2018 9:37pm
Haha it's a better way to explain why it happened...thank you for the humorous thought.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
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16th Sep 2018 7:44am
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16th Sep 2018 1:17pm
Thank you Danny. It's really and I am suffering...hope it will be fixed tomorrow.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Leakage
22nd Sep 2018 1:25am
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22nd Sep 2018 9:01am
Thank you Brother. We are still looking for the problem. It won't be fixed soon. Sad!