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As of today....
Would you be my mattress?
Or maybe my maitresse?
Summer is like syphilis
It fries your brain eventually
Leaves nothing but sweaty musk
on everything you touch
My lengua has no more linguistics
Or maybe my maitresse?
Summer is like syphilis
It fries your brain eventually
Leaves nothing but sweaty musk
on everything you touch
My lengua has no more linguistics
Author's Note
How's that for a writers block?
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- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
13th Sep 2018 9:21pm
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13th Sep 2018 9:23pm
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13th Sep 2018 9:26pm
Oh wow, cool. Stay tuned. You'll really like my next one, when enough time has passed that I can post it!
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2018 9:35pm
Awesome, Angel! and funny. Don't tell anyone, but I had to look up lengua to see if it was really a word(I'm not the brightest bulb in the fixture), and it is! Good job.
Matthew.
PS. Your writing block poems are better than my regular poems! Damn!
Matthew.
PS. Your writing block poems are better than my regular poems! Damn!
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13th Sep 2018 9:44pm
Yeah, I took lengua from spanish because it relates to the linguistics and I think the image of the tongue is somewhat absurd. I like writing short pieces. They just pop out sometimes.
Thank you Elusive
Thank you Elusive
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13th Sep 2018 11:52pm
Yes, yes, short poems can burst on the scene in a way that feels so great!
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13th Sep 2018 9:43pm
Bleaghhh!
That's quite the description you give...
very colorful and most decidedly evocative...
writer's block...brought on by excessively warm weather... Ely
That's quite the description you give...
very colorful and most decidedly evocative...
writer's block...brought on by excessively warm weather... Ely
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14th Sep 2018 5:00pm
With all those 's' sounds, seems like writer's block is slithering away into the undergrowth. Great poem.
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I am glad your ear isss tuned into the hissssing sounds....writers block slithered off to author's notes.
Thank you for stopping by Josh
Thank you for stopping by Josh
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