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28th Aug 2018 1:40am
Lovely, JeJe. 📝❤
For the final line I would suggest losing "they" and pluralize slip.
simply slipping free
For the final line I would suggest losing "they" and pluralize slip.
simply slipping free
28th Aug 2018 1:44am
Ahhh, yes .. thank you as always for your lovely comments and gentle critique Ahavati .. much appreciated ♡
28th Aug 2018 2:33pm
28th Aug 2018 2:57pm
