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Heartless
I see your flowers
what never bloomed
Right there behind your eyes
How you can feel it’s tickling funny
and then the lust.
Yeah
I’ll put some fuel in your ass.
what never bloomed
Right there behind your eyes
How you can feel it’s tickling funny
and then the lust.
Yeah
I’ll put some fuel in your ass.
Published 16th Aug 2018
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20th Aug 2018 11:45pm
The first three lines are great! I'm all for using nature metaphors. You have some spelling errors but great otherwise.
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4th Sep 2018 5:55am
Very messy: blooming flowers, behind your eyes, in your ass, it’s kinda evolving through everything into last two lines cliche??? Cmon
