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Re. Presence
13th Aug 2018 4:35pm
Re: Re. Presence
14th Aug 2018 3:15pm
Re. Presence
13th Aug 2018 5:23pm
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14th Aug 2018 3:22pm
Re. Presence
13th Aug 2018 11:12pm
A short and precise way to show how people aren't aware of their surroundings, in this case a person's absence. Whether or not it's because they don't pay attention or they don't care depends on each person, but both have the same dark result.
Nice work!
Nice work!
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Re: Re. Presence
14th Aug 2018 3:24pm
You're right, my friend!
"Being there" requires awareness of and connection to the surroundings!
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"Being there" requires awareness of and connection to the surroundings!
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Re: Re. Presence
19th Aug 2018 1:12pm
It's fitting that you are of a suspicious mind, 'cause, certainly, John Smith is a suspicious character...
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