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Presence
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Presence
John Smith will be here
because he fears his absence
may not be noticed...
Written by
takis1917
Published
13th Aug 2018
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Re. Presence
Angelast1
13th Aug 2018 4:35pm
Nice roundabout haiku. Reminds me of someone who needs to be needed.
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takis1917
14th Aug 2018 3:15pm
I appreciate your comments, Angel!
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Re. Presence
Ely
(E.A.Rothwell)
13th Aug 2018 5:23pm
If his absence is not worthy of note
Will his presence fare any better?
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takis1917
14th Aug 2018 3:22pm
Most probably, not!
Thank you, Ely!
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Re. Presence
LunasChild8
13th Aug 2018 11:12pm
A short and precise way to show how people aren't aware of their surroundings, in this case a person's absence. Whether or not it's because they don't pay attention or they don't care depends on each person, but both have the same dark result.
Nice work!
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takis1917
14th Aug 2018 3:24pm
You're right, my friend!
"Being there" requires awareness of and connection to the surroundings!
Thank you for commenting!
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19th Aug 2018 4:43am
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Re: Re. Presence
takis1917
19th Aug 2018 1:12pm
It's fitting that you are of a suspicious mind, 'cause, certainly, John Smith is a suspicious character...
Thank you for reading and commenting!
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