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Home of Treasure
The scent of my excitement will lead you home,
As I plead for you to annihilate me beyond control
My body so mightily poised for you like a throne,
Ecstasy reached in places we've never to have known
Your body welcome and beckoned to every single inch,
Our pinnacle reached in the deepest of pleasures
Both crying out as my sweet love drips and pours,
Impaling 'til you're at home in my box of treasures
As I plead for you to annihilate me beyond control
My body so mightily poised for you like a throne,
Ecstasy reached in places we've never to have known
Your body welcome and beckoned to every single inch,
Our pinnacle reached in the deepest of pleasures
Both crying out as my sweet love drips and pours,
Impaling 'til you're at home in my box of treasures
Published 13th Aug 2018
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13th Aug 2018 5:38am
13th Aug 2018 6:51am
So very glad to hear..thank you dearly for the add as well, my friend!
Brava Pandora! I love that you begin with the powerful allure if scent.
13th Aug 2018 5:53pm
13th Aug 2018 8:00am
A lovely poetic setting for the moment of willing consummation. Treasure pleasure!
Anonymous
13th Aug 2018 12:02pm
Here I will re-echo what I have previously said regarding your master use of attributes and mataphors, just like a painter with colours. You are growing into a great poetess. You take our minds on beautiful journeys. Hugs J.
13th Aug 2018 5:54pm
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13th Aug 2018 5:47pm
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13th Aug 2018 5:56pm
I thank you kindly...it is always nice to see a new person I've yet to see over here in my world...greatly appreciated!
Anonymous
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13th Aug 2018 6:40pm
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13th Aug 2018 7:19pm
Pandora, your erotic mind is a box of treasures which takes me in deeply. I love what you do with words and how you make me want more. ;-)
John
John
13th Aug 2018 8:26pm
I am honored and humbled by such gracious words and thoughts;) Thank you for the add and may my box continue to keep some hidden treasures!
Anonymous
9th Apr 2024 6:27am
...what a breath of fresh air and intimacy...
luv this!!!
luv this!!!
9th Apr 2024 7:05am
Oh my, you pulled out an oldie....
Way before I discovered rhyme schemes and my comfort zone, so I'm glad you still enjoyed it.
Way before I discovered rhyme schemes and my comfort zone, so I'm glad you still enjoyed it.
