Her Words

"Pretty pink pages peeled back and parted"
what a metaphor! met her for 'sweetly dripping as he tasted'
sensational!  (by coincidence I was eating honey as I read "waves of thick honey)
kismet

Thank you. I'm so glad you found it so.. as I'm also giggling at the irony of eating honey!

Brava Pandora!  That picture is so sensually illustrative of your words in the piece.  You make words sexy.

I could hug you for such kindness. ..it truly is inspiring and soothing to a girl who is trying!  It's funny how I could not create a single piece of poetry when I arrived,  I was all prose. Now it is my prose in which I now struggle with. One of my first pieces here was called Invitation which faintly inspired this along with the picture.. a less is more approach was unfathomable back then!

I'll have to read some of your prose. I've written very few. There aren't many readers willing to go the distance on prose. I have trying to make as much of an impact with fewer rather than more words. Your poetry is awesome.

Like the sensuous book and reading metaphors. Can imagine as a seduction line, "May I read you like a book?"!

Thank you..the picture grabbed my idea,  but more so, prose I first posted in my early arrival here

My dearest Pandora, you are becoming a great painter. Your use of key metaphors, attributes and images make you a fantastic poetess. You might want to change your description on your introductory page. You are a great poetess. You know how to use words like a brush. Fantasticly. Hugs J.

I'm beyond humbled, flattered and grateful for every encouraging word from a girl trying hard.  It is hard to believe prose came so easily. Every piece was prose when I first joined and now I'm unable to do it with ease, replaced by poetry instead, which I craved to do..

Reading you my libido has been rejuvenated into youthful vigor. Your poetry is an aphrodisiac of the most delightful kind.

John

I thank you dearly for such inspiring words. It's so nice to see new faces in my world..glad you peeked in!

This personification is wonderful

Thank you so much JusTim..it is greatly appreciated!!