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Weather... or Not
Lots of spots get lots of rain
and lots of spots do not.
Lots of spots get lots of both,
are cold... though some are hot.
It all depends on where you are
and also on the season.
The vagaries of weather leave
no room for rhyme or reason.
and lots of spots do not.
Lots of spots get lots of both,
are cold... though some are hot.
It all depends on where you are
and also on the season.
The vagaries of weather leave
no room for rhyme or reason.
Published 13th Aug 2018
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13th Aug 2018 1:35am
13th Aug 2018 3:28am
13th Aug 2018 2:29am
I like it
but not as captivating as most of your work
but it's still a good piece
but not as captivating as most of your work
but it's still a good piece
13th Aug 2018 3:49am
13th Aug 2018 11:56pm
Well, there's certainly room for rhyme & reason with this effort, Ely. ;-)
Ironic, ain't it?
... and thank you very much .
You do have a point, though... the last line is a direct contradiction of what it states... a poetic oxymoron, if you will... heheheh
Y'know, this is too funny..?. Ely
... and thank you very much .
You do have a point, though... the last line is a direct contradiction of what it states... a poetic oxymoron, if you will... heheheh
Y'know, this is too funny..?. Ely
14th Aug 2018 1:55am
14th Aug 2018 2:49am
"seemingly absurd, or contradictory statement..."
I think you're right... one of those lovely little confluences
where everything comes together... *JĒ
I think you're right... one of those lovely little confluences
where everything comes together... *JĒ
21st Oct 2018 8:38pm
Ah... but confluence comes, ''trippingly off the tongue'' as the line is read... Ely
