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Wake up
Just breathe
or why don’t I hold it
And just stand here until
I’m Outside my body
Looking upon a listless capsule
It’s all just one big hassle
Sigh, what a disaster
Air in my lungs...
or why don’t I hold it
And just stand here until
I’m Outside my body
Looking upon a listless capsule
It’s all just one big hassle
Sigh, what a disaster
Air in my lungs...
Published 12th Aug 2018
Author's Note
When you wake up from a twisted dream and you think how do I get back there.
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Anonymous
12th Aug 2018 12:22pm
I know the feeling. Sadly you can't go back. Good ink. J.
12th Aug 2018 11:23pm
12th Aug 2018 4:20pm
sounds more like an OOBE than a dream....there are techniques to repeat this experience...a true awakening
12th Aug 2018 11:27pm
My dreams are quite vivid and real...definitely does feel like an oobe. I truly appreciate them.
2nd Sep 2018 6:56pm
4th Sep 2018 00:33am
