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my mother. . .
i saw my mother
hanging in the closet
hanging clothes
i saw my mother
cutting herself in the kitchen
cutting herself apples
i saw my mother
burning in the yard
burning trash
i saw my mother
kill herself
kill herself. . .
. . dead.
hanging in the closet
hanging clothes
i saw my mother
cutting herself in the kitchen
cutting herself apples
i saw my mother
burning in the yard
burning trash
i saw my mother
kill herself
kill herself. . .
. . dead.
Published 26th Oct 2011
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27th Oct 2011 4:23pm
this is such an interesting selection
its so simple but after further inspection
its like the whole time you were alluding to seeing the symtoms
leading up to her being the victim
but they were so subtle until after the fact
& thats just about how it always happens, how real it that....
i really liked this selection....great job!
its so simple but after further inspection
its like the whole time you were alluding to seeing the symtoms
leading up to her being the victim
but they were so subtle until after the fact
& thats just about how it always happens, how real it that....
i really liked this selection....great job!
29th Oct 2011 8:25am
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8th Aug 2012 3:30am
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