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a pussy's redemption
you entered with your chaos and sex
and I was lost in you
chained to your lusts
a prisoner to passion
I burned with it night and day
to the point of pain
I ached for your touch
deep inside my inner pussy walls
they craved to be filled
with your masculine hardness
stretching me to my limits
my tiny hole crying out for redemption
a baptism of semen
flooding my inner sanctum
in you I found god
and he was a man
Dominant and in control
with an intellect of steel
bending me to his will
in your hands, I'm like a little girl
where you lead I follow
in your arms, I'm all vixen
rising to greet your thrusts
moaning out my pain and lust
you reel me in when I'm out of control
then push me to the brink again
where I fall over the edge
into your debauchery and sin
your submissive whore
who you take great pleasure in breaking
just to see me reborn
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Re. a pussy's redemption
7th Aug 2018 2:08pm
Riding the waves of this delightful sensual sensuality erotically charged write
Great accompanied picture too 😊😚
Great accompanied picture too 😊😚
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Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
7th Aug 2018 2:56pm
Re. a pussy's redemption
Anonymous
7th Aug 2018 3:14pm
Crim, this is an incredible rise of penned pleasure

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Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
7th Aug 2018 3:15pm
aw thank you so much dearest Ragnar you put a smile on my face this morning :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. a pussy's redemption
7th Aug 2018 3:17pm
Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
7th Aug 2018 3:18pm
giggles sexy Lyrical One
I have a man and I'm sure you a lady ;)
thank you for digging my erotics...
love Crim
I have a man and I'm sure you a lady ;)
thank you for digging my erotics...
love Crim
Re. a pussy's redemption
“stretching me to my limits
my tiny hole crying out for redemption
a baptism of semen
flooding my inner sanctum “
My virgin purple pen would be too afraid to penetrate your walls of write for their is no space to leave mark.
Your making my innocence come back or
Maybe not...
my tiny hole crying out for redemption
a baptism of semen
flooding my inner sanctum “
My virgin purple pen would be too afraid to penetrate your walls of write for their is no space to leave mark.
Your making my innocence come back or
Maybe not...
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Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
7th Aug 2018 4:06pm
Re. a pussy's redemption
7th Aug 2018 4:08pm
Hey Crim....just curiosity....are you a guy or a gal?
I mean, When I read your sex poems I get more the idea I am looking at a man's fantasy. Don't mean to insult you but I know what's out there.
I mean, When I read your sex poems I get more the idea I am looking at a man's fantasy. Don't mean to insult you but I know what's out there.
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Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
7th Aug 2018 4:10pm
I'm all woman I've done readings on several of my poems... If you want to hear my voice and a well known poetess here skype's with me regularly... it's just the way I write...
love Crim
love Crim
Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
7th Aug 2018 4:20pm
Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
7th Aug 2018 4:24pm
it's fine beautiful but I can only write what i'm inspired to write... it never occurred to me I appear masculine... i'm not a gender bender or out to perpetrate a fraud though I know it's done...
Re. a pussy's redemption
Anonymous
7th Aug 2018 4:12pm
Excellent work here my dear crimsin
U have talent in the erotic art writes
Always :)
U have talent in the erotic art writes
Always :)

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Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
7th Aug 2018 4:14pm
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Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
7th Aug 2018 4:15pm
Re. a pussy's redemption
Now I understand your connection that you were telling about Lucifer. This piece speaks of the beauty of tormented pleasure, and as you said being pushed beyond boundaries. Like an old vampire once said " I can move in the light with limitation, but in the darkness, I am free to be the fiend, to succumb the unthinkable, as I'm being serenaded by the screams of my victims, who secretly call out to me. I'm joking I don't know any vampires, that's just a line from one of my short stories. But I'm sure you get what I'm saying.
Oh, loved the art piece by the way
Oh, loved the art piece by the way
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Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
7th Aug 2018 4:48pm
thank you very much I enjoyed your snippet of the vampire in one of your stories... yes Lucifer and I go way back this is one of my lighter poems i've gone much darker in days past but i'm known here as a dark angel... here is a link to a poem of mine I think you would enjoy....
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/257295-abaddons-whore/
thank you for your interest in my writes and your thoughtful comments it's enjoyable and it helps me get to know you...
love Crim
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/257295-abaddons-whore/
thank you for your interest in my writes and your thoughtful comments it's enjoyable and it helps me get to know you...
love Crim
Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
7th Aug 2018 10:49pm
Re. a pussy's redemption
8th Aug 2018 9:34pm
Sounds like the ultimate Master, one who refashions (or rebirths) you into a marvel, although you already are one in my book. Great job!
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Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
8th Aug 2018 9:37pm
thank you graciously Sir Crow for feeling the essence of this write...
love Crim
love Crim
Re. a pussy's redemption
9th Aug 2018 2:31am
Excuse me while I pick my tongue up off the floor, n try to leave quietly even though my cock keeps hittin the walls pin my exit lol
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Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
9th Aug 2018 2:36am
Re. a pussy's redemption
1st Sep 2018 7:22pm
Can’t thank you enough for bringing us all with you on your erotic adventures, Crim. You leave me as breathless as your muse leaves you...
More, please :D
More, please :D
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Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
1st Sep 2018 7:37pm
thank you graciously dearest Taurus i'm both beaming and blushing from your comment... I will see what I can do ;)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. a pussy's redemption
6th Sep 2018 11:05pm