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The Moon Is An Eye
It's late
as I stare
at an open gate
there's silence in , the rotting fence
it's been a while since
it formed defence
I'm alive but in
a dead suspense .
In the still of night
days recall to mind
try as I might
I just can't ever unwind
I know I must fight
It gets harder though I try
there's an owl in flight
and the moon is a big eye
we three are alike
alone in the night sky .
There's an hourly tone
a tired church bell drones alone
shaky leaves
from the yawning breeze
creatures crawl
around me on my knees
I'm down thats all
just don't rub it in
please .
as I stare
at an open gate
there's silence in , the rotting fence
it's been a while since
it formed defence
I'm alive but in
a dead suspense .
In the still of night
days recall to mind
try as I might
I just can't ever unwind
I know I must fight
It gets harder though I try
there's an owl in flight
and the moon is a big eye
we three are alike
alone in the night sky .
There's an hourly tone
a tired church bell drones alone
shaky leaves
from the yawning breeze
creatures crawl
around me on my knees
I'm down thats all
just don't rub it in
please .
Published 25th Oct 2011
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26th Oct 2011 11:41pm
27th Oct 2011 3:44am
Into Blind (SP Summerscales)
Hello ,
infinity night
your dead out there
although ,
I get your light .
It's lonely here
below the stratosphere
were nowhere near
but to me your clear
am I in your sights .
You became my friend ,
your dark
you listen
dogs bark
street lights glisten ,
no end
to your mission
you bend
comprehension
can I lend
some vision
to tend
my dimension
the other end
of the spectrum
you aprehend
all to be done .
So once again
hello my friend
you've always been there
you breathe
without air
I see you
when there's nothing there ,
no feet
but you get everywhere .
So when we meet
I hope that you still care .
Hello ,
infinity night
your dead out there
although ,
I get your light .
It's lonely here
below the stratosphere
were nowhere near
but to me your clear
am I in your sights .
You became my friend ,
your dark
you listen
dogs bark
street lights glisten ,
no end
to your mission
you bend
comprehension
can I lend
some vision
to tend
my dimension
the other end
of the spectrum
you aprehend
all to be done .
So once again
hello my friend
you've always been there
you breathe
without air
I see you
when there's nothing there ,
no feet
but you get everywhere .
So when we meet
I hope that you still care .
27th Oct 2011 8:51am
Darkness
Show me passion
Show me play
I stay
I wait
patiently
Nothing
can wait
a long time
I love you...
Show me passion
Show me play
I stay
I wait
patiently
Nothing
can wait
a long time
I love you...
27th Oct 2011 7:37pm
nice verse by the way here's another on those lines :)
Unborn Nostalgia (SP Summerscales)
I need you to reinvent
my unborn nostalgia
to strike a dent
in my butterfly neuralgia
a song for when I die
a lament
for us
forever after
to redefine
my scarred memory eye
and sit with me and cry
through to laughter
I greed you to much
I need you badly
for your present state I cannot touch
the arms I would welcome gladly
Instead I act so butch
but apart I fall so sadly
different keys now unlock your doors
but all I ask is open up to me.
Unborn Nostalgia (SP Summerscales)
I need you to reinvent
my unborn nostalgia
to strike a dent
in my butterfly neuralgia
a song for when I die
a lament
for us
forever after
to redefine
my scarred memory eye
and sit with me and cry
through to laughter
I greed you to much
I need you badly
for your present state I cannot touch
the arms I would welcome gladly
Instead I act so butch
but apart I fall so sadly
different keys now unlock your doors
but all I ask is open up to me.
wow! May I?
Memories, sepia
rose-tinted
yesteryears
hold nothing
but echoes of laughter
and drying tears
Nostalgia unborn
tomorrow bound
to be shared
unspoken yet
whispers
'dont leave me..yet!'
this is an impromptu verse for you...but I like your verses. Could not resist. Hope you don't mind.
Memories, sepia
rose-tinted
yesteryears
hold nothing
but echoes of laughter
and drying tears
Nostalgia unborn
tomorrow bound
to be shared
unspoken yet
whispers
'dont leave me..yet!'
this is an impromptu verse for you...but I like your verses. Could not resist. Hope you don't mind.
28th Oct 2011 00:09am
not at all thanks for that :) you may like this one too lol
A You without I ( SP Summerscales )
I await
for our future times
a golden spiked gate
amid the summer vines
can I compensate
for past written lines
myself I hate
because I made you cry
don't ever hesitate
or wonder why
for you I wait
under the crying sky
I capitulate
and inside I die
my mind frustrates
through a rubies eye
my heart you golden plate
then my soul it flies
yours I could not break
for I'd rather die
if I turn to flakes
and blow off in a sigh
its because I could not take
a you without I
A You without I ( SP Summerscales )
I await
for our future times
a golden spiked gate
amid the summer vines
can I compensate
for past written lines
myself I hate
because I made you cry
don't ever hesitate
or wonder why
for you I wait
under the crying sky
I capitulate
and inside I die
my mind frustrates
through a rubies eye
my heart you golden plate
then my soul it flies
yours I could not break
for I'd rather die
if I turn to flakes
and blow off in a sigh
its because I could not take
a you without I
28th Oct 2011 00:22am
My God! I am tempted, again.
Under a velvet sky
this lonely hesperide
searches for 'I'
before a void
a single tear
a brief gasp
a sigh
'Wait..please'
Under a velvet sky
this lonely hesperide
searches for 'I'
before a void
a single tear
a brief gasp
a sigh
'Wait..please'
28th Oct 2011 5:42am
ha ha ha ha ha great stuff and here goes again ha ha ha
A Sky In Each Eye (SP Summerscales)
Am I real
can you deal
with all the layers
that you feel
the thoughts
as I kneel
on the floor
yes I'm real
my mind
is not blind
and nor
did I steal
the contents inside
they are mine
the real deal .
If you think
for a minute
in sinc
yes I'm with it
the light
you will find
is the chink
I am in it .
Just trying to find
the blink
that hides
I know these times
but you got to stick with it .
You have to believe
not all do deceive
we are fresh
we so mesh
it's so stupid to leave .
So how do I proove
that you I won't use
each other we peruse
there's only me
in my shoes
and yes I know
that your you
I love
I conclude
there's a sky in each eye
and each one is for you
all I ask is believe
in the task
you can't see
my mind without eyes
is not blind
it still see's ..
What more can I do
I don't want war
not with you
your my wife
let's not fight
can we join
the happy crew .
A Sky In Each Eye (SP Summerscales)
Am I real
can you deal
with all the layers
that you feel
the thoughts
as I kneel
on the floor
yes I'm real
my mind
is not blind
and nor
did I steal
the contents inside
they are mine
the real deal .
If you think
for a minute
in sinc
yes I'm with it
the light
you will find
is the chink
I am in it .
Just trying to find
the blink
that hides
I know these times
but you got to stick with it .
You have to believe
not all do deceive
we are fresh
we so mesh
it's so stupid to leave .
So how do I proove
that you I won't use
each other we peruse
there's only me
in my shoes
and yes I know
that your you
I love
I conclude
there's a sky in each eye
and each one is for you
all I ask is believe
in the task
you can't see
my mind without eyes
is not blind
it still see's ..
What more can I do
I don't want war
not with you
your my wife
let's not fight
can we join
the happy crew .
28th Oct 2011 6:59am
Omg...if I replied we would never stop! wow that was exhilarating! Thank you Paul for allowing me a brief glimpse of a brilliant mind.
28th Oct 2011 1:16pm
Yes I know it would go on forever ha ha ha and remember it takes one to know one :)
