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The way things are
Skies of peach kiss the mountain tops
Tender green grows after last night's rain
Symphony of birds awoken
greeting life as the day unfolds its wings
Somewhere an old man died in his sleep
And the world turns....
Tender green grows after last night's rain
Symphony of birds awoken
greeting life as the day unfolds its wings
Somewhere an old man died in his sleep
And the world turns....
Published 2nd Aug 2018
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2nd Aug 2018 5:12pm
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2nd Aug 2018 5:22pm
beautiful Angel I love the contrasting beauty
of nature with the old man's death
because dying in your sleep is beautiful too...
gorgeous ink...
love Crim
of nature with the old man's death
because dying in your sleep is beautiful too...
gorgeous ink...
love Crim
2nd Aug 2018 7:53pm
Thank you Crim...yes, this is supposed to be a poem of beauty and harmony, as designed by nature.
2nd Aug 2018 6:57pm
2nd Aug 2018 7:54pm
2nd Aug 2018 10:22pm
That's beautiful, Ange... and painted with just the right-sized brush. Not easy to hang lush words on a spare framework. Kudos... you just pulled off a fine piece of work. ely
3rd Aug 2018 00:44am
2nd Aug 2018 11:34pm
Beautifully composed in it's simplicity. A single lovely day of birth and death
3rd Aug 2018 00:46am
3rd Aug 2018 00:33am
3rd Aug 2018 00:47am
12th Aug 2018 00:30am
Yes, the World keeps spinning & the birds keep singing despite everything.
