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Indigo Soul
I give my life's blood to this lady
so she can create
my indigo soul
pours from my mouth
onto paper
and we tango
her thoughts, my essence
formulating words
conjured from the cosmos
she applies slight pressure
then away we go
dancing across the page
I swirl, she dips
her intellect, my tip
sharp as any razor
cutting all truth
separating fact from fiction
when a lie seeks freedom
I give her pause puddling on her paper
until she gives up the goods honestly
I am her life and her mine
more intimate than her husband
is Sir Quill of the order over writers
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 26th Jul 2018
Author's Note
for RevolutionAL's Personification comp.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Indigo Soul
Anonymous
26th Jul 2018 9:52pm
Absolutely beautiful! Oh Crim...you are magical...just simply lovely!
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Re: Re. Indigo Soul
26th Jul 2018 9:53pm
thank you beautiful Ally I was trying to make my pen come alive imagining what he would say if he were a person :)
i'm happy you liked it...
love Brenda
i'm happy you liked it...
love Brenda
Re. Indigo Soul
26th Jul 2018 10:15pm
You have as much, or more, imagination as anyone here. This poem just goes to show. "Indigo Soul" is a gem!
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Re: Re. Indigo Soul
26th Jul 2018 10:16pm
thank you graciously Sir Crow you made me smile it's just a bit of fun for the comp.
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Indigo Soul
Anonymous
26th Jul 2018 10:24pm
I love this entry, beautiful Dark Angel. You and your muse wield that quill with great skill! I love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. Indigo Soul
26th Jul 2018 10:34pm
thank you graciously beautiful Willow I loved your entry too :)
I love you...
love Brenda
I love you...
love Brenda
Re. Indigo Soul
26th Jul 2018 11:23pm
Re: Re. Indigo Soul
26th Jul 2018 11:24pm
Re. Indigo Soul
27th Jul 2018 00:15am
Excellent , Lady Crim !
One of your best , in my mind !
But then I am partial to the art of the Quill ,
"I swirl, she dips
her intellect, my tip"
And rhyme , of course !
One of your best , in my mind !
But then I am partial to the art of the Quill ,
"I swirl, she dips
her intellect, my tip"
And rhyme , of course !
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Re: Re. Indigo Soul
27th Jul 2018 00:46am
Re. Indigo Soul
Anonymous
27th Jul 2018 2:55am
Brenda, simply bowing.. my beautiful sister, you are the queen.. love you..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Indigo Soul
31st Jul 2018 1:38pm
thank you graciously dearest Dave this poem is about a ballpoint pen lol :)
I love you my brother...
love Brenda
I love you my brother...
love Brenda
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
27th Jul 2018 6:37am
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Re: Re. Indigo Soul
31st Jul 2018 1:38pm
Re. Indigo Soul
27th Jul 2018 7:02am
So very lovely! I adore this line for its content, and for the way it sounds
"I swirl, she dips
her intellect, my tip "
"I swirl, she dips
her intellect, my tip "
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Re: Re. Indigo Soul
thank you beautiful Atomik One I love that part too it just came out of me what my pen would say if he were alive :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. Indigo Soul
30th Jul 2018 3:56pm
I see that You are still bringing it straight forward and intelligently written - wouldn't expect anything less from Your caliber - Brenda.
Good to see.
Good to see.
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Re: Re. Indigo Soul
31st Jul 2018 1:40pm
thank you graciously dearest Pan so happy to see you around this way again :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. Indigo Soul
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2018 9:34pm
One of my new favorites.
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2nd Aug 2018 9:44pm