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Heartbroken
Time
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Time
They say
Time heals
All wounds
How can
That be true
When I still miss you
Written by
steelerman
Published
23rd Jul 2018
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Re. Time
Kexby
(john rickell)
- Edited 23rd Jul 2018 10:55pm
23rd Jul 2018 10:43pm
Time heals but leaves a scar. Your poem is simple each word justifying its place, had you written more you may have said less,many poems are too long .Kexby
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steelerman
24th Jul 2018 12:37pm
Thanks
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SweetOblivion
24th Jul 2018 9:16am
Simple, spartan and strong.
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steelerman
24th Jul 2018 12:37pm
Thanks
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NewBeginnings
7th Jan 2020 8:04pm
Touching...
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