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Blue Sunday
Angels come and demons go
Heaven or Hell the final stop
Purgatory in the mix
The waiting room for those who strayed
All the nectar in the world
Swallowed but to no effect
Faces tend to putrefy
Leaving puddles on the kitchen floor
One hot mama thinks it's best to pray
Recited by her kneeling throng
Words carried on the organ notes
The flesh is weak, but will is strong.
Heaven or Hell the final stop
Purgatory in the mix
The waiting room for those who strayed
All the nectar in the world
Swallowed but to no effect
Faces tend to putrefy
Leaving puddles on the kitchen floor
One hot mama thinks it's best to pray
Recited by her kneeling throng
Words carried on the organ notes
The flesh is weak, but will is strong.
Published 21st Jul 2018
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21st Jul 2018 8:47pm
I really enjoyed this sexy Sunday revival
now that's how you get a man to pray ;)
love Crim
now that's how you get a man to pray ;)
love Crim
21st Jul 2018 9:00pm
I wrote this thinking today is Sunday.. Just goes to show how haywire my sense of time is. Oh well. Thanks Crim, I'll watch the calendar next time.
21st Jul 2018 10:01pm
The will is indeed ... strong ... great write crowfly ... you always manage to be one step ... or day ... ahead of the rest of us ... *wink*
Yep, got the day wrong. I really should have a calendar in my face. Maybe I'll do a "Saturday Blues." Got enough to go around. :) Thanks, LilDragonFly,
21st Jul 2018 11:49pm
Sunday’s, are made for exploring the things that may have unfolded, from the evening before !
Here’s hoping you don’t have blue balls... come Monday ~ 😎🎈🌞🌹🌻
Here’s hoping you don’t have blue balls... come Monday ~ 😎🎈🌞🌹🌻
22nd Jul 2018 2:54am
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22nd Jul 2018 5:24pm
Wow Crow......if I had read this before church my mind would’ve for sure strayed.......tipping my pen to you with respect.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Jul 2018 9:11pm
Wouldn't want to disturb you in your church devotions. I'm glad you made the mass first. That's the most important thing. Thank you dear Flower!
