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Best-Friends-Forever
I bask in the warmth
of your smile like the Sun...
peel off the layers
of pain and protection...
I can show my Me to you.
You give me comfort;
touch me for no reason
save you love me.
You will not hurt me.
I can give my Me to you.
...in time...
I won't need you any more...
I won't love you any less...
of your smile like the Sun...
peel off the layers
of pain and protection...
I can show my Me to you.
You give me comfort;
touch me for no reason
save you love me.
You will not hurt me.
I can give my Me to you.
...in time...
I won't need you any more...
I won't love you any less...
Published 14th Jul 2018
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14th Jul 2018 4:02am
14th Jul 2018 4:11am
14th Jul 2018 5:20am
Thanks, Ange... I see what you mean about vulnerable
I never gave it much thought as I was writing. Ely
I never gave it much thought as I was writing. Ely
14th Jul 2018 1:53pm
this is as deep
and as sweet and effective
as it gets
dear poetess!
words
of a heart
that's seen much
and is grounded in reality
ps: Stanza 3, Line 3, Word1... did you mean "say" or am not able to get the word right dear friend?
and as sweet and effective
as it gets
dear poetess!
words
of a heart
that's seen much
and is grounded in reality
ps: Stanza 3, Line 3, Word1... did you mean "say" or am not able to get the word right dear friend?
Dear Fusion... You are too kind... but thank you for the gracious and lovely words. They are much appreciated.
As to S3,L3,W1... Pardon my somewhat archaic English. "Save", in this instance means 'except'. (preposition, etymology of 'save' in the meaning of 'except'.courtesy of google) Hope this helps. Ely
As to S3,L3,W1... Pardon my somewhat archaic English. "Save", in this instance means 'except'. (preposition, etymology of 'save' in the meaning of 'except'.courtesy of google) Hope this helps. Ely
