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slippy
my fingersntoes aRE fully webbed out of necessity in this icecold h20 air
i'm wearing my condom suit with the breathable stretch
everything i touch turns to slip
and i slip my fingers in it
i'm gelled up and slippy
with the resistance of particles, i never touch you
but when i do you're warm but you dont warm me my fish/skin is
slippy
i slip right through
i'm wearing my condom suit with the breathable stretch
everything i touch turns to slip
and i slip my fingers in it
i'm gelled up and slippy
with the resistance of particles, i never touch you
but when i do you're warm but you dont warm me my fish/skin is
slippy
i slip right through
Published 12th Jul 2018
Author's Note
dead account: exe https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/169076-slippy/
originally filed under 'non-fiction prose' out of sheer bloody mindedness, now filed under 'love' for the same reason
originally filed under 'non-fiction prose' out of sheer bloody mindedness, now filed under 'love' for the same reason
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12th Jul 2018 10:42pm
I never realised you were "exe".
Thank you for posting this. Anna it's gonna sound like I'm blowing smoke up your ass. Think of it more as constructive ass smoke.
See you have this unbelievable ability to take a story and write it in a short quick read that doesn't leave one thinking she's only giving a glimpse. It's really fascinating. Don't ever loose that, it's your most valuable writing quality that this reader truly apreciates.
Loved the word plAy on "slip".
Al
Thank you for posting this. Anna it's gonna sound like I'm blowing smoke up your ass. Think of it more as constructive ass smoke.
See you have this unbelievable ability to take a story and write it in a short quick read that doesn't leave one thinking she's only giving a glimpse. It's really fascinating. Don't ever loose that, it's your most valuable writing quality that this reader truly apreciates.
Loved the word plAy on "slip".
Al
12th Jul 2018 10:48pm
was just skimming thru your poems and thinking they were too long/lines were too long. idk. maybe just giving (but not in this poem--it's the right amount for itself) too much away? anyways I like these poems
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2nd Apr 2020 7:23pm
i am writing the final chapter of something i might call the emo hunger games or something
13th Jul 2018 3:56pm
dearest Anna the condom suit did it for me
along with the slick imagery...
love Brenda
along with the slick imagery...
love Brenda
