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Skylight
Since I had the skylight
a kaleidoscope of your eyes
I can see the stars glide
those parachuting mushrooms
full bloom on the roof tiles
every night all the time
Tonight it’s just as usual
my dream state seems real
as the stars come to my roof
drawing jade wine in the well
where is my home I dwell
every night at the bottom I lie
expect to see them decline
Living in the well of suntan
I’m just like a diehard fan
Hiding beneath the skylight
peeking with innocent eyes
I lift the veil, so
the stars can cross the vessel
coming down the space tunnel
Therefore I can be in person
witness their beauty pageant
The road is old and narrow
guide me to the way of hollow
thanks to your mysterious eyes
lead me to admire the starry skies
So much enjoy being a voyeur
seeing star kids lining up there
Wish you could tell me all
write their names on the wall
so I can do the roll call
just as what I do at the school hall
Shhh! Let‘s keep the secret
for fear that they will secrete
we know how much they want to
have a window in the roof too
so they can see me through
by the skylight of you
a kaleidoscope of your eyes
I can see the stars glide
those parachuting mushrooms
full bloom on the roof tiles
every night all the time
Tonight it’s just as usual
my dream state seems real
as the stars come to my roof
drawing jade wine in the well
where is my home I dwell
every night at the bottom I lie
expect to see them decline
Living in the well of suntan
I’m just like a diehard fan
Hiding beneath the skylight
peeking with innocent eyes
I lift the veil, so
the stars can cross the vessel
coming down the space tunnel
Therefore I can be in person
witness their beauty pageant
The road is old and narrow
guide me to the way of hollow
thanks to your mysterious eyes
lead me to admire the starry skies
So much enjoy being a voyeur
seeing star kids lining up there
Wish you could tell me all
write their names on the wall
so I can do the roll call
just as what I do at the school hall
Shhh! Let‘s keep the secret
for fear that they will secrete
we know how much they want to
have a window in the roof too
so they can see me through
by the skylight of you
Author's Note
I can see the mysterious beauty through your eyes
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Re. Skylight
10th Jul 2018 1:12pm
Re: Re. Skylight
10th Jul 2018 1:39pm
Dear Tim. I feel so nice having your comment.. the word "amazing" is a great compliment for me. Thank youuuu...(still echoing)
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
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10th Jul 2018 1:19pm
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Re: Re. Skylight
10th Jul 2018 1:58pm
Dear John, I always love to read your comment. So glad you loved it.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Skylight
Jasmine, you write romance so well. Wouldn't it be interesting and risky to view ourselves as we are viewed by others? Brava!
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Re: Re. Skylight
11th Jul 2018 5:56am
Oh Bob, it would be interesting but a bit scary to be viewed by others.
However, from DUP poetry, everyone can view each other's inside world...that's really cool.
Thank you Bob!
love
Jasmine
However, from DUP poetry, everyone can view each other's inside world...that's really cool.
Thank you Bob!
love
Jasmine
Re. Skylight
10th Jul 2018 11:52pm
what a beautiful write i imagine you were writing about a telescope. such a sweet an endearing way to describe stars in your eyes. i really enjoyed your poem.
love marielle
love marielle
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Re: Re. Skylight
Thank you my dear, glad you enjoyed it. I have been daydreaming of stars. Those are cute little mysteries.
I miss your poem very much ...
love
Jasmine
I miss your poem very much ...
love
Jasmine
Re. Skylight
11th Jul 2018 2:19am
"Since I had the skylight
a kaleidoscope of your eyes
I can see the stars glide
those parachuting mushrooms
full bloom on the roof tiles
every night all the time"
gorgeous rhyming..this is lovely
you flow into different grooves
and spin the meta-physic vision,
love the lighted sky
Jeff
a kaleidoscope of your eyes
I can see the stars glide
those parachuting mushrooms
full bloom on the roof tiles
every night all the time"
gorgeous rhyming..this is lovely
you flow into different grooves
and spin the meta-physic vision,
love the lighted sky
Jeff
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Re: Re. Skylight
11th Jul 2018 6:06am
The skylight is such an amazing thing, isn't it? Coincidentally, someone's eyes are like the skylight...interesting....
Thank you for the nice comment.
love
Jasmine
Thank you for the nice comment.
love
Jasmine
Re. Skylight
11th Jul 2018 10:17pm
you rapture us with the first two lines, well done
"Since I had the skylight
a kaleidoscope of your eyes"
the innocent eyes
old and narrow roads
starry skies
I enjoy the voyeur aspect.
well penned RoseJasmine, keep'em coming.
"Since I had the skylight
a kaleidoscope of your eyes"
the innocent eyes
old and narrow roads
starry skies
I enjoy the voyeur aspect.
well penned RoseJasmine, keep'em coming.
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Re: Re. Skylight
12th Jul 2018 1:21am
Oh Samael, it's so nice of you spending time writing your comment here.
I feel I am honored having those kind words.
Thank you my dear friend.
love
Jasmine
I feel I am honored having those kind words.
Thank you my dear friend.
love
Jasmine
Re. Skylight
12th Jul 2018 5:18am
Your beautiful heart sings clearly through your lovely lines and stanzas.
Daniel
Daniel
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Re: Re. Skylight
12th Jul 2018 4:12pm
Ah, Daniel, thank you for the lovely comment. You are always the one who can read my mind...
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Skylight
14th Jul 2018 2:14pm
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14th Jul 2018 5:33pm
Re. Skylight
Anonymous
16th Jul 2018 1:09am
So very beautiful RJ, your words, your heart - just gorgeous :)

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Re: Re. Skylight
16th Jul 2018 3:00am
Dear Sophie, thank you for the kind words. You know I love your words and heart too.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Skylight
Anonymous
27th Jul 2018 12:34pm
Sometimes a mysterious beauty is not so mysterious.

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Re: Re. Skylight
27th Jul 2018 4:14pm
Well said Andy. Nothing is mysterious when the beauty can be seen....
Thank you so much for the thought and the reading list add.
love
Jasmine
Thank you so much for the thought and the reading list add.
love
Jasmine