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young buck
your lust for me doesn't go unnoticed
you're a younger man
at least twenty years my junior
but I've always gone for an older man
to make me feel secure
don't get me wrong sexy
I find you hot but you make me feel reckless
just the idea of stepping out on my man
frightens me
I'm no longer into the games
that come with sex
pattycake baker shit
you won't be getting into my oven son
talking your mess
you can say I thought you were a down chick
all you want
because I am
I'm down for my man
loyalty's got to count for something these days
sex is fun but you don't have the experience
to even make my head turn
being young and good looking
is a minus in my book
cos I know you're cocky
not in the way a man of certain skill levels is
you're still fumbling in the dark
trying to figure out how a woman works downtown
not to put you out
but you just don't appeal
good looking, yeah you are
so is my man at sixty
and he knows how to handle the curves
of a real woman
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Re. young buck
Re: Re. young buck
7th Jul 2018 2:19pm
thank you dearest Poet most graciously I just got really turned off by this good-looking guy's advances and I started turning over in my mind why and the poem was born...
happy you enjoyed the truth of it...
love you...
me
happy you enjoyed the truth of it...
love you...
me
Re. young buck
Anonymous
7th Jul 2018 2:01pm
Can I just say I love it! Excellent defense of experience. God, this is the first time I have found this message loud and clear! And the wording is shear perfection. Hugs to you, my sweet sister. J.

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Re: Re. young buck
7th Jul 2018 2:20pm
thank you graciously dearest Juvenalis for feeling the truth of this message there is a lot to be said for a man with experience...
here's to the men of this world...
love me
here's to the men of this world...
love me
Re. young buck
Anonymous
7th Jul 2018 3:00pm
Loving this. Nothing wrong with the cockiness of youth I guess, but there are times when it needs to be put in its' place. Remember reading a satirical book many moons ago, called something like 'the boy who invented sex at 16 & a half.'

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Re: Re. young buck
7th Jul 2018 7:19pm
thank you dearest Rob most graciously for the love and understanding on this write and the book reference....
love Raven
love Raven
Re. young buck
7th Jul 2018 3:12pm
Bravo my poetess ... reminds me of a few guys I know ... give me a seasoned man ...
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Re: Re. young buck
7th Jul 2018 7:21pm
thank you graciously beautiful Dragonfly yes sigh a man who knows what he's doing :)
love Raven
love Raven
Re. young buck
7th Jul 2018 5:13pm
Love this one. I like my man seasoned too. Babyface might be handsome, but I want to see those roads time has carved into a face...and the experience that comes with it.
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Re: Re. young buck
7th Jul 2018 7:23pm
thank you graciously dearest Angel yes a seasoned man with experience...
I appreciate the love on this write...
love Raven
I appreciate the love on this write...
love Raven
Re. young buck
7th Jul 2018 6:08pm
Re: Re. young buck
7th Jul 2018 7:25pm
thank you graciously, dearest Sweet One I know right but I'm really loyal...
love Raven
love Raven
Re. young buck
7th Jul 2018 10:03pm
As a next year 60 year old this gives me hope...just got to find the loyal woman.
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7th Jul 2018 11:39pm
Re: Re. young buck
8th Jul 2018 7:41am
Am using a couple of dating sites, which also give me an outlet for verse in my messages.
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9th Jul 2018 00:38am
Re. young buck
Anonymous
7th Jul 2018 10:21pm
Raven.. lie that sweet smack of truth down.. dig this.. much love, and respect..
Dave
Dave

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Re: Re. young buck
7th Jul 2018 11:40pm
Re. young buck
Anonymous
11th Jul 2018 7:35pm
Feeling this one. Young and hot don't count for much up against experience and seasoning. And loyalty does count for a lot these days, lovely Raven. Well done! :-)
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow

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Re: Re. young buck
11th Jul 2018 11:22pm
thank you beautiful Willow for feeling me on this write no young stud is going to turn my head when I have love and experience at home...
I love you...
me
I love you...
me
Re. young buck
3rd Sep 2018 1:46am
If the sixty year old in question is truly all that, then no one can blame you. Besides (and I speak from past experience) talk in youth is easy for boys called men by legality. The lyrical quality of this piece almost sounds like street bomb rap to put the kid in his place; you definitely succeed
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Re: Re. young buck
3rd Sep 2018 3:20am
thank you dearest Taurus this particular night the youth in question kept texting me trying to get me to come outside and meet him I was very irritated when I wrote this...so it was said in a slightly slamming manner...not to be condescending to younger men really...
love Brenda
love Brenda