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lesson
my mother always
told me to chew
my food one
hundred
times
I only chewed
ninetynine
that must be
why I'm so
fucked
up
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6th Jul 2018 1:54am
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6th Jul 2018 1:55am
You think?
But... it's you make beautiful poems...
you are a product of your history... we all are.
if you had chewed 100 times you would not be the same BuddahKitty...
and we would maybe not have your beautiful poems.
I like you just like you are.Ely
But... it's you make beautiful poems...
you are a product of your history... we all are.
if you had chewed 100 times you would not be the same BuddahKitty...
and we would maybe not have your beautiful poems.
I like you just like you are.Ely
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6th Jul 2018 2:05am
Thank Ely. As Oscar Wilde said, " Be yourself, everyone else is taken.
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Hahaha....I inhale my food...I am far gone....
I hope...hell I know...you have a sense of humor about yourself...
I hope...hell I know...you have a sense of humor about yourself...
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