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Civility
Some things are timeless
unfluctuating in vibration
despite variation
By its nature, Love
an unwavering portrait
of stabilized growth
Similarly, Compassion
encompassing solidly
steadfast in warmth
Likewise, Gratitude
an ever-appreciative attitude
toward each presenting moment
Lastly
the gallantry of Civility
is not a weakened state
because its battle cry isn't
"Fight hate with hate!"
unfluctuating in vibration
despite variation
By its nature, Love
an unwavering portrait
of stabilized growth
Similarly, Compassion
encompassing solidly
steadfast in warmth
Likewise, Gratitude
an ever-appreciative attitude
toward each presenting moment
Lastly
the gallantry of Civility
is not a weakened state
because its battle cry isn't
"Fight hate with hate!"
Published 2nd Jul 2018
Author's Note
An Android's simple observations on humanity
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Anonymous
2nd Jul 2018 11:39am
Ava, the structure and flow of this write of yours is an amazingly well oiled ball bearing conveyer. It rhymes and near rhymes in all the right places with precision.
You capture everything as it exists on a scale of extremes - Hate being the other end of the vibrational stick opposite Love, Compassion and Gratitude. Hate being the end of the stick used as a retaliatory weapon instead of a cane or walking stick to lean upon during difficult times.
This poetry of yours brims with eloquence. 📝💕
You capture everything as it exists on a scale of extremes - Hate being the other end of the vibrational stick opposite Love, Compassion and Gratitude. Hate being the end of the stick used as a retaliatory weapon instead of a cane or walking stick to lean upon during difficult times.
This poetry of yours brims with eloquence. 📝💕
2nd Jul 2018 6:15pm
Thank you. I feel it's not complete somehow, so am leaving it open to grow. 📝💕
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2018 11:47am
If more humans were like you, this Universe would be a more pleasant place to be in. 💻❤
2nd Jul 2018 6:15pm
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