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A walk in the woods
The sun drips
through the
trees like sweet
nectarine
I find my inner
peace like
shadows on
the leaves
There I sense
she is
whispering
to me
Like a soft
cool breeze
in the lush
evergreen
Careful not
to tread on
a heart that
bleeds
How I long
to believe
that she could
love me
Beneath the
shade of
an old
oak tree.
through the
trees like sweet
nectarine
I find my inner
peace like
shadows on
the leaves
There I sense
she is
whispering
to me
Like a soft
cool breeze
in the lush
evergreen
Careful not
to tread on
a heart that
bleeds
How I long
to believe
that she could
love me
Beneath the
shade of
an old
oak tree.
Published 26th Jun 2018
Author's Note
I went deep into the woods to search my soul for answers...
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26th Jun 2018 7:24pm
ask her she will
all gals want to be asked for it
just bow and unzip
if she smiles it's okay
if she does not =aaaaaahokayyyyyyyyy
all gals want to be asked for it
just bow and unzip
if she smiles it's okay
if she does not =aaaaaahokayyyyyyyyy
26th Jun 2018 7:31pm
27th Jun 2018 2:36am
26th Jun 2018 7:51pm
26th Jun 2018 7:54pm
Thanks Crim. It was just what I needed today...clear my head. There is something beautiful about being in nature...accept for the insects!
26th Jun 2018 8:16pm
27th Jun 2018 9:41am
Thanks so much. I tried to capture what I felt in the wild...writing down my thoughts...on a fallen tree. Hope it makes sense?
27th Jun 2018 00:25am
27th Jun 2018 9:47am
27th Jun 2018 12:31pm
Amazing SK ... love the style ... great flow ... cadence ... short lines ... crisp line breaks ... vulnerability ... desire ... hope ... *sigh*
27th Jun 2018 4:21pm
I feel like a teenager...taking my notebook with me...writing how I feel. The things we do...for love.
28th Jun 2018 11:11pm
