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you're too late

Try to break me?
Darling, I'm broken already.

Try to leave me?
Darling, I'm alone already.

Try to hurt me?
Darling, I've cried already.

Try to kill me?
Darling, I'm dead already.

Written by _victoria_

(Wusk)

Published 19th Jun 2018

#death #heartbroken #loneliness #sadness

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Re. you're too late

Anonymous

19th Jun 2018 8:37pm

I can feel the sadness here. It can only get better.

Re. you're too late

Angelast1

19th Jun 2018 11:50pm

I like the way this is written...Also There is a lot of hope here, because it is when you've got nothing to loose that you might be at your best. You've been to the dark side....let's now do the other thing....maybe?