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To Despair Nowhere
I sit on the floor
in the middle
of our apartment
alone
It doesn't feel like home
without you.
It's the simple things I miss:
your kiss, your skin
your deep gaze
our simple meals together
and watching old comedies.
I am still amazed by how much
I Love You.
in the middle
of our apartment
alone
It doesn't feel like home
without you.
It's the simple things I miss:
your kiss, your skin
your deep gaze
our simple meals together
and watching old comedies.
I am still amazed by how much
I Love You.
Published 18th Jun 2018
Author's Note
ive been on vacation from DUP for a couple years now, but now im back at it. I do feel a liitle disjointed about writing again and it comes out a bit in this poem.
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18th Jun 2018 2:30pm
Love doesn't alter when it alteration finds. This expresses that wonderfully, Matthew.
Good to see you again.
Good to see you again.
18th Jun 2018 3:48pm
18th Jun 2018 8:18pm
Hey hey Mr Bass
Glad you popped in.
An utterly decent offering you bring along with you too.
Good to see!
Hope to read more, soon.
In terms of this poem... I loved that yearning for the one you love seeping between the lines in it. You've put together an amazing poem here. I do hope she gets to read it.
Blue Skies at you
Al
Glad you popped in.
An utterly decent offering you bring along with you too.
Good to see!
Hope to read more, soon.
In terms of this poem... I loved that yearning for the one you love seeping between the lines in it. You've put together an amazing poem here. I do hope she gets to read it.
Blue Skies at you
Al
18th Jun 2018 10:22pm
15th Dec 2018 9:35am
Mike, how deep, simplistically truth & love ur poetics...
I loved the spacing that breathes in..that italic ...the colon & the eternity of that last verse you zeroed in so beautifully. loved the tints of chaos & grays & all that yearns ..in this journey you scribe..
write on more x:)
I loved the spacing that breathes in..that italic ...the colon & the eternity of that last verse you zeroed in so beautifully. loved the tints of chaos & grays & all that yearns ..in this journey you scribe..
write on more x:)
