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I dare you
I feel you talking to my pussy
its language anger
it doesn't respond to any other
but you knew that didn't you?
within your rage
you possess a raging boner
hard enough to penetrate my virgin hymen
you picked the lock
to my chastity belt
then fucked me hard
though a virgin you recognize
i'm no beginner
with lusts that match your own
I rise to meet you
my hunger for your seed
further incites your anger
with fury you admonish
"you will learn your place beneath me
crazy woman from the stars
who laughs when in mortal danger"
I giggle nervously then look behind me
you've spoken to me directly
my demons all recognize you
I hope you never get your hands on me physically
I feel your heat in this mortals body
and I know I've behaved foolishly
teasing you from behind the veil
revealing my lusting form
then feigning innocence
when your desires are made known
teach me a lesson in respect
I've been naughty my soul is hell bent
I kissed the devil when you weren't looking
make me a believer
in faithfulness and true humility
I dare you
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Re. I dare you
17th Jun 2018 7:16pm
I love the forceful playfulness of this...although never having succumbed to Christian mythology, its deities and demons, I appreciate your use of such deeply programmed iconography to stir things up...I love it when you stir things up
Lawrence
Lawrence
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17th Jun 2018 7:19pm
thank you dearest Lawrence you're right it's my childhood beliefs coming to light here in my playful challenge..
I'm happy this one stirred you :)
love Brenda
I'm happy this one stirred you :)
love Brenda
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17th Jun 2018 9:45pm
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19th Jun 2018 6:08am
Re. I dare you
17th Jun 2018 10:47pm
Another fiercely brilliant write, Crim. You manage to transform anger to lust, no small task. This one's scary and funny at the same time. And offering a dare? You can't say you didn't furnish a warning...
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19th Jun 2018 6:09am
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow for feeling the desire behind the anger..
I deeply appreciate your visits..
love Crim
I deeply appreciate your visits..
love Crim
Re. I dare you
18th Jun 2018 1:06am
"teach me a lesson in respect
I've been naughty my soul is hell bent
I kissed the devil when you weren't looking"
Such solid aweso-nessification
the haunting fierce walk through your mind's eye pathway...
always stimulate the picture show on the back of my skull...
usually film noir
love you
Jeff
I've been naughty my soul is hell bent
I kissed the devil when you weren't looking"
Such solid aweso-nessification
the haunting fierce walk through your mind's eye pathway...
always stimulate the picture show on the back of my skull...
usually film noir
love you
Jeff
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Re: Re. I dare you
19th Jun 2018 6:10am
aw thank you dearest Jeff I freaking love your comments they make me smile :)
love Crim
love Crim
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Anonymous
18th Jun 2018 1:33am
Brenda.. i dare anyone to try to master the art, of inking as you are truly the queen.. love you my sister..
Dave
Dave
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19th Jun 2018 6:11am
Re. I dare you
18th Jun 2018 3:12am
This lady is all fucking in! I triple dog dare you back. holy sexy shit...<3
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19th Jun 2018 6:12am
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18th Jun 2018 5:40am
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Anonymous
20th Jun 2018 4:05am
My love - we do certainly enjoy being bad in the search of lessons being learned now don’t we? The fierceness in this ink is exhilarating, just as you are...you have several nerves tingling here!
I love you madly, deeply
Xoxo with all my love Taryn
I love you madly, deeply
Xoxo with all my love Taryn
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20th Jun 2018 2:25pm
thank you my love i'm so happy this was thrilling to you as it was for me to write :)
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda