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Maria Evicted
Returning home that morning
she was not surprised...
All she ever owned,
on the sidewalk
in front of the apartment building entrance.
A couch
a table
couple of chairs
some books
some clothes
an old computer
a mattress
a frying pan
a saucepan
a pack of spaghetti #10...
She had received the notices
she knew it, she expected it...
She approached, sat on the couch.
Pulled out a pack of cigs
- one cigarette left -
she lit.
A thought of "what's next?'
crossed in and out of her mind.
She had a few relatives, one or two friends...
Didn't feel considering options
she walked in the drug store
and walked out back to her belongings
with a fresh supply of smokes
and out of her last ten dollars...
Threw the spaghetti #10 pack in her purse
and started away slowly but steadily
soon disappearing within the faster tempo
of the busy, moving crowd...
she was not surprised...
All she ever owned,
on the sidewalk
in front of the apartment building entrance.
A couch
a table
couple of chairs
some books
some clothes
an old computer
a mattress
a frying pan
a saucepan
a pack of spaghetti #10...
She had received the notices
she knew it, she expected it...
She approached, sat on the couch.
Pulled out a pack of cigs
- one cigarette left -
she lit.
A thought of "what's next?'
crossed in and out of her mind.
She had a few relatives, one or two friends...
Didn't feel considering options
she walked in the drug store
and walked out back to her belongings
with a fresh supply of smokes
and out of her last ten dollars...
Threw the spaghetti #10 pack in her purse
and started away slowly but steadily
soon disappearing within the faster tempo
of the busy, moving crowd...
Written by
takis1917
Published 16th Jun 2018
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Re: Re. Maria Evicted
17th Jun 2018 9:19pm
Re. Maria Evicted
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17th Jun 2018 9:20pm
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17th Jun 2018 9:21pm
Re. Maria Evicted
16th Jun 2018 11:01pm
You have captured the struggles of the ordinary person most extraordinary. Well written.
buddhakitty.
buddhakitty.
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17th Jun 2018 9:23pm
Re. Maria Evicted
18th Jun 2018 6:02pm
Whenever you do the observational way of the detailing in ur verses..that's always an unconditional applause from this diehard fan..cos in all its casualness n the routine u pack such (extreme) situations n the (unwavering) subject's crosssection. the title is strong enough to make this read reread read reread n times..i extract the essence of the whole that's not worded not versed .such is the beauty of this piece..
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Re: Re. Maria Evicted
18th Jun 2018 10:19pm
Dear Sum.
Thank you, again, for respecting the words, their various uses and attributes, their signification of presence or absence and of what is left unsaid (but, not un-signified).
Thank you, again, for respecting the words, their various uses and attributes, their signification of presence or absence and of what is left unsaid (but, not un-signified).
Re. Maria Evicted
19th Jun 2018 12:39pm
Engaging poetry ... always ... pulls me in ... keeps me there till the end ...
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Re. Maria Evicted
20th Jun 2018 3:27pm
..and beloved Maria returns with another glimpse into her life.
It's a scary place to be in life when the choices and opportunities get minimal and you have done a superb job once again.
I will keep on stalking your page to read more of this wonderful character.
It's a scary place to be in life when the choices and opportunities get minimal and you have done a superb job once again.
I will keep on stalking your page to read more of this wonderful character.
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21st Jun 2018 12:19pm
Re. Maria Evicted
23rd Jun 2018 7:27pm
You capture so much here, subtly in your description of this woman's experience, of the human experience. It takes skill to imbue lines thusly. Interesting to contemplate and feel Takis.
Daniel
Daniel
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