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With love, Rayne
Dear world
I don't know how long I'll be here for
And I have a message
I could tell you it's from God
Maybe you'll listen
Or maybe you'll spot the lie
And close your mind forever
But this is important
So I want you to sit forward
And ignore the storm arage outside
I want you to focus
And remember these words as if they were the first words you ever heard
And the last words you'll ever remember
You are here to change the world
And only you can decide how to do it
I don't know how long I'll be here for
And I have a message
I could tell you it's from God
Maybe you'll listen
Or maybe you'll spot the lie
And close your mind forever
But this is important
So I want you to sit forward
And ignore the storm arage outside
I want you to focus
And remember these words as if they were the first words you ever heard
And the last words you'll ever remember
You are here to change the world
And only you can decide how to do it
Published 13th Jun 2018
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14th Jun 2018 2:27pm
"You are here to change the world
And only you can decide how to do it"
There is such an epic shortage of world changers in our chaos, we call life.
The classic style works well here, as does the demanding tone in the lead to the final lines in this... I even felt myself hunch forward to read them, as I was told. Then I blushed and giggled at myself.
Kudos' on the write, the message, and form
Blue Skies at you
Al
And only you can decide how to do it"
There is such an epic shortage of world changers in our chaos, we call life.
The classic style works well here, as does the demanding tone in the lead to the final lines in this... I even felt myself hunch forward to read them, as I was told. Then I blushed and giggled at myself.
Kudos' on the write, the message, and form
Blue Skies at you
Al
14th Jun 2018 4:30pm
