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Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
I'm so ditsy I can't keep um straight
Crimsin and Raven same woman
different techniques
Raven is where I come to hide
to secret my private thoughts
away from prying eyes
I come here to just be me
say what I want
without worrying so much about creativity
I can post my spiritual poems
without flinching
Crim has a spiritual side?
gasp call the devil
the one she so flagrantly served
do you doubt me?
read her early work
Crim tries to be on point with her writes
while Raven let's it all hang out
not giving a shit what anyone thinks
they are the same person it's me Brenda
I keep them separate inside me
or there would be an internal rumble
Crim would boss Raven around
telling her you can't post that
it's pure shit and you know it
she would spit in Crims face
then it would be on
Crim would call her demons
and order bind this bitch
she's giving me a bad reputation
with all this upbeat spiritual shit
so there it is and here I am
Raven really does love Crimsin
Crimsin loves Raven
either way they're stuck with each other
and sometimes when it's quiet inside
you just might get a peek of Brenda
Author's Note
can't keep um straight sometimes
so I thought i'd post this funny...
so I thought i'd post this funny...
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Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
13th Jun 2018 6:06am
Creatively takes many faces of expression
Fun light write
beautiful read
Fun light write
beautiful read
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Re: Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
13th Jun 2018 6:08am
thank you beautiful Rose indeed it does mine is so vastly varied I had to create and alter ego lol :)
love Raven aka Crimsin and Brenda
love Raven aka Crimsin and Brenda
Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
13th Jun 2018 6:08am
Re: Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
13th Jun 2018 6:11am
giggles dearest Poet i'm just being silly I accidentally commented as Crimsin here under Raven and I felt embarrassed lol :)
love you..
Brenda
love you..
Brenda
Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
Ahh, Raven/Crimsin & sometimes Brenda, you know what? To me? There’s more of you to care about.
Jade/Tiger 🐾
Jade/Tiger 🐾
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Re: Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
13th Jun 2018 3:46pm
Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
Re: Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
13th Jun 2018 3:46pm
Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
Anonymous
13th Jun 2018 2:42pm
You crack me up with this one, gorgeous! Your voice is so distinct, regardless of which persona you don, that it's clear to those who know and love you. And I do, my beautiful Dark Angel Raven ;-)
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
giggles i'm glad because I was just being silly after yet another of my slip ups posting Crim under Raven lol :)
I love you..
love me
I love you..
love me
Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
13th Jun 2018 3:50pm
Re: Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
13th Jun 2018 3:56pm
thank you dearest Tim for the sexy comment..this is just me being silly but with some truths as to why I post under different names..
love me
love me
Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Jun 2018 00:13am
14th Jun 2018 00:11am
To love a person, you must love the whole. We are all doctor Jekle and Mr Hide. Ying and Yang are the perfect example of balance of the individual. Your two identities are, like you say, part of the same individual, Brenda. She is the union of two parts that complete the beautiful whole. I am here as Juvenalis, the satyrical soul, reincarnation (spiritual not physical) of the vengeant voice of justice against hypocrisy. I couldn't freely write most of what truly is in my soul if I used my given name. It's a case of being prudent. I do reveal it to those I feel I can trust and I have. But to others, I want to be a free soul with a thousand sides. Here I can express rare (very rare lately) moments of joy, moments of defeat, moments of despair and feelings of death and mostly, a naughty side. My hunger for Lust and pleasure, that otherwise I couldn't reveal without being judged wrongely and condemned by the well-thinking. You are a very special and beautiful soul my dear. I truly feel it. And I'm hardly ever wrong. I feel changes as I interact and, many times I see without seeing. This is at my advice ŕ gift I really don't want but that I have. It doesn't stop me from doing stupid things and trusting the wrong people. But I feel that you have suffered much and that makes you a lovely soul in my eyes (my third eye is open in many occasions). Thank you for this beautiful confession. It gave me true insights about a wonderful being. Love and light to you. J.
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Re: Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
14th Jun 2018 1:02am
thank you dearest Juvenalis you are a beautiful soul to embrace me and all my many facets.. I understand the need to be free to be oneself in writing.. when I began as Crimsin I was free to do so but over time I changed and it's very restricting to be held to a certain standard or genre all the time.. so Raven was born so I would have more freedoms.. here I can post my spiritual poems and poems some may think are not so good or different from my Crimsin style..
I cherish your thoughts and visits to my pages :)
love me
I cherish your thoughts and visits to my pages :)
love me
Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
Anonymous
14th Jun 2018 3:43am
My love - first I absolutely LOVE this...second I have read the reactions to this ink...I spit up in my mouth over one if I’m to be honest...each distinct voice gives us an even bigger picture of all which you are and all which you have endured and offer...embarrassed for a “slip”...HA! All things happen for a reason my love...it was time to show all just how many incredible facets you have...each of them mesmerizing and breathtaking...
How I love you...passionately and eternally - there is nothing which could ever separate...
With all my love eternally
Xoxo Taryn
How I love you...passionately and eternally - there is nothing which could ever separate...
With all my love eternally
Xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
14th Jun 2018 6:30pm
thank you my love i'm so happy this made you giggle like it did me writing it.. as you know yourself we are not one sided individuals but have many sides and facets that shine I glow inside that you love all of mine like I do yours..
I love you wildly..
love me
I love you wildly..
love me
Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
15th Jun 2018 4:41am
All your selves are amazing and brave writers even if they bicker the end result is greatness :)
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Re: Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
17th Jun 2018 4:41pm
Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
Anonymous
24th Jun 2018 7:58am
Such a fun write....
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Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
21st Nov 2019 10:03pm
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Re: Re. Raven, Crimsin and sometimes Brenda
21st Nov 2019 10:55pm
thank you dearest poet for the love on this write...I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤