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Flashes of my childhood
plagues me now...
every now and then
I play it out
Always changing schools
and starting over
Never getting the chance
to say good bye to newly made friends
before I'm a stranger all alone
in a big ugly school...
I carry this now like a bag of stones
and try to be nice to every new soul
that comes to a place where now i'm but old
I know how it feels to be all alone
and that's why I stalk DU newbies
dropping some sugar in the mentions
where before there were
ZERO COMMENTS.
plagues me now...
every now and then
I play it out
Always changing schools
and starting over
Never getting the chance
to say good bye to newly made friends
before I'm a stranger all alone
in a big ugly school...
I carry this now like a bag of stones
and try to be nice to every new soul
that comes to a place where now i'm but old
I know how it feels to be all alone
and that's why I stalk DU newbies
dropping some sugar in the mentions
where before there were
ZERO COMMENTS.
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