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SPIRIT
A time in coldest winter’s hunt,
Exacting stealth of huntress’ walk
To listen for the prey’s confront,
My eyes scan tree lines as I stalk
In silent running fallen ice
The words of lyrics’ quiver lie,
Melodic whispers to entice
As ‘neath the snow they fearful hide.
To take a leap the moment when
The breaking of eclipsing moon
Releases shards of glass’ descend,
False shadows of false day’s illume,
My ears lay flat against my fur
As then I flinch from bright assault,
The tribal chants within me stir
O’er muted frozen creek I vault.
Once on the other side to halt,
Alert I wheel around to roar
To call with ancient spell exalt,
A tiger’s song of spirit lore
On gentle rise of powder white
A silhouette of eagle’s wing,
To soar across then out of sight
Yet not before I hear her sing.
Exacting stealth of huntress’ walk
To listen for the prey’s confront,
My eyes scan tree lines as I stalk
In silent running fallen ice
The words of lyrics’ quiver lie,
Melodic whispers to entice
As ‘neath the snow they fearful hide.
To take a leap the moment when
The breaking of eclipsing moon
Releases shards of glass’ descend,
False shadows of false day’s illume,
My ears lay flat against my fur
As then I flinch from bright assault,
The tribal chants within me stir
O’er muted frozen creek I vault.
Once on the other side to halt,
Alert I wheel around to roar
To call with ancient spell exalt,
A tiger’s song of spirit lore
On gentle rise of powder white
A silhouette of eagle’s wing,
To soar across then out of sight
Yet not before I hear her sing.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 10th Jun 2018
| Edited 20th Jun 2018
Author's Note
The tiger as spirit guide.
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10th Jun 2018 4:29am
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10th Jun 2018 1:53pm
Great poem, Jade! The tiger is the perfect spirit animal for you as you proudly show your royal colours through your work. Thanks for participating in my competition!
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10th Jun 2018 8:30pm
I’m honored to be a part of your competition, dear Luna. I was about to publish my new piece (that I had completed just moments before), when I saw it listed, and the title. I could hardly believe my eyes - the timing. It felt like an omen, and a place for my SPIRIT.
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10th Jun 2018 2:36pm
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10th Jun 2018 8:34pm
Thank you very much, dear Tim. I always appreciate your thoughts whenever you visit.
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10th Jun 2018 2:45pm
this made me smile all the way through - I feel the tiger's night - I see with tiger's sight, the echoed chants in tiger's song, the words arrive where roars belong... jade tiger
tommycat
tommycat
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10th Jun 2018 8:40pm
Why thank you so much, dear tommycat, for such an embrace in your very lyrical way... and for the honor of place.
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2018 4:58pm
I completely love the strength shown in this work!! Absolutely fantastic!!
Your words are beautiful and perfect!!
Amazing job!!
Your words are beautiful and perfect!!
Amazing job!!
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10th Jun 2018 8:45pm
Oh dear Friend, your words & appreciation of my write have swept me up, and leaves me breathless...
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11th Jun 2018 1:18am
"In silent running fallen ice
The words of lyrics’ quiver lie,
Melodic whispers to entice
As ‘neath the snow they fearful hide. "
My favorite!
The words of lyrics’ quiver lie,
Melodic whispers to entice
As ‘neath the snow they fearful hide. "
My favorite!
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11th Jun 2018 2:04am
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11th Jun 2018 1:56am
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11th Jun 2018 2:06am
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Anonymous
16th Jun 2018 2:20am
I absolutely love traditional styles and this with its awesome ebb and flow is complete perfection.
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16th Jun 2018 3:42am
Ooh my goodness, dear Joanne, thank you for sharing your thoughts of your embrace of my work... both of which mean so much. And my warmest welcome to you now that you’ve joined us here in the Deep. We’ll meet again, surely.
Jadey 🐾
Jadey 🐾
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
18th May 2019 10:43am
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