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I love you Poet and here's why
you are a man of honor
you don't take no shit
when I lie on the page you know it
because bullshit doesn't fly
it stinks
my best hasn't hit a nerve in you in a long time
maybe I've gone soft
but don't count me out mister
I haven't given up yet
I will arouse your passion
get you fired up
why because it's so sexy
to see you lay it down hard
I will get you fully erect
with a raging boner
suck you as long as it takes
while your favorite porno queen is playing
till you have me lapping at your cum
no spitting always swallow kind of whore
your dirty little hell slut
shooting it straight is your way
you don't play games
if people were wondering now they know
real talk from a true New Yorker
you asked me what I love about you
how about I don't get no ass kissing from you
if I don't get your full attention
you skip over me
I respect that
I respect you
your hard where a man should be
you piss nails
then melt me with prose
how do you do it?
all wrapped in that sexy package
you got me turned on just thinking about you
so there it is
truth be told
I am in love with a man I can never have
but damn it that's hot
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 9th Jun 2018
Author's Note
for Poetspeak I love you
you're real with me..
you're real with me..
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Re. I love you Poet and here's why
You're right Brenda, when you're not writing up to snuff, I totally fucking ignore you. It almost gives me wood to do so because I know you're capable of better. All that talk about your cream makes me want to slap you hard across your face and ass, because you can do better and you're just calling it in.
We're sick fucks, who deserve each other. Our own personal "me too" movement of depravity. Should I go on or did you cum already cunt ?
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Xoxo babe
We're sick fucks, who deserve each other. Our own personal "me too" movement of depravity. Should I go on or did you cum already cunt ?
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Xoxo babe
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Re: Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 3:31pm
damn it you know i'm masochistic
yes those painful verbal truths sting
in all the right places..
I will have welts from this one
because it's you..
you know me and I get embarrased
when I feel myself slipping..
I know you're watching
i'm turned on but I will save this for later
when I can completely tune into the energy your sending..
I'm too soft now Poet
people want my ferocity..
i'm whining lol i'll stop..
thank you..
love Brenda
yes those painful verbal truths sting
in all the right places..
I will have welts from this one
because it's you..
you know me and I get embarrased
when I feel myself slipping..
I know you're watching
i'm turned on but I will save this for later
when I can completely tune into the energy your sending..
I'm too soft now Poet
people want my ferocity..
i'm whining lol i'll stop..
thank you..
love Brenda
Re: Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 3:37pm
Lovingly hurting you
I definitely have a rod going. It's a shame it's not going to splay over your literary beautiful face
Stay strong Brenda, I'll always whip you solid
X
I definitely have a rod going. It's a shame it's not going to splay over your literary beautiful face
Stay strong Brenda, I'll always whip you solid
X
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Re: Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 3:39pm
Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 3:33pm
Most people only say they want it real, you really do
You're my outcast in black leather at a suburban bbq where everyone is trying so hard to be casual and you're not trying at all .... You're doing lines off a designer sink and taking it up the ass for sport. I like that
Next stop, nipple clamps at the book club reading....
X
You're my outcast in black leather at a suburban bbq where everyone is trying so hard to be casual and you're not trying at all .... You're doing lines off a designer sink and taking it up the ass for sport. I like that
Next stop, nipple clamps at the book club reading....
X
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Re: Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 3:37pm
giggles thank you for the love Poet
I feel your tenderness here :)
you paddle my ass and then kiss the tears gone
I really can feel you.. you know?
yes I need you and your truth..
not many people to give it to me..
love Brenda
I feel your tenderness here :)
you paddle my ass and then kiss the tears gone
I really can feel you.. you know?
yes I need you and your truth..
not many people to give it to me..
love Brenda
Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 3:42pm
You're e still the Queen of DUP
You kick the crap out them with one stroke. Taryn and Willow, your enforcers if you get bogged down.
I get it
Yo
You kick the crap out them with one stroke. Taryn and Willow, your enforcers if you get bogged down.
I get it
Yo
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Re: Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 3:46pm
aw Poet thank you you're melting me now.. i've never seen myself as Queen but you make me blush i'm beaming here :) now lady Devlin yeah she was my dark Queen.. Taryn, Willow and me got your back too true beauties they are..
Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 4:07pm
Feels kind of voyeuristic reading such an intense, and powerfully written, love letter....love the raw intensity of it.....Lawrence
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Re: Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 4:11pm
thank you dearest Lawrence for feeling the intimate nature of this write and for showing love for it..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 4:39pm
Re. I love you Poet and here's why
Anonymous
9th Jun 2018 6:47pm
Brenda.. such a nice ink, dedicated to the boss.. he the man, you're the queen.. good company.. never had a poem written about me.. i'm not complaining.. haven't earned the cred yet.. you guys make me push farther.. love you both..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 6:50pm
aw Dave I never thought of that before it seems like I did maybe not though I feel bad.. I love you my brother you my partner in crime remember I danced with you more intimately than anyone..
thank you for the love on this write..
love you..
Brenda
thank you for the love on this write..
love you..
Brenda
Re: Re. I love you Poet and here's why
Anonymous
9th Jun 2018 6:59pm
Brenda.. no problem.. no worries.. i know you love me.. you've been my biggest supporter.. since the earliest days.. i didn't mean you needed to write a poem about me.. nor does anyone.. i wanna earn that honor.. love you, my beautiful and brilliant and sister..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 7:01pm
oh my dearest brother you've more then earned that honor I will see what I can come up with.. inspiration will carry me away to your doorstep to leave you with a sense of the love I feel for you..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 7:54pm
Poetspeak should be honored, seems to me. Even when you're "calling it in" I can't stop reading. Your work is daring, and never ceases to amaze me.
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Re: Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 8:00pm
giggles thank you dearest Sir Crow yes I try not to submit anything i'm not really feeling but they can't all be winners in the start of a poem you just never know even after posting I sometimes have to sit with a poem until it grows on me..
I appreciate the love you show me..
love Crim
I appreciate the love you show me..
love Crim
Re. I love you Poet and here's why
Anonymous
9th Jun 2018 9:32pm
Love this write and you two are freakin awesome...Epic.
that is all
Ben xx
that is all
Ben xx
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Re: Re. I love you Poet and here's why
9th Jun 2018 9:34pm
thank you graciously dearest Ben you yourself are rocking you gifted me smiles today I deeply appreciate your presence..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. I love you Poet and here's why
10th Jun 2018 6:09am
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10th Jun 2018 6:40am
Re: Re. I love you Poet and here's why
10th Jun 2018 6:46am
Re. I love you Poet and here's why
11th Jun 2018 2:19am
''no spitting always swallow kind of whore''
whew..
this vibe is raw to the bone
whew..
this vibe is raw to the bone
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Re: Re. I love you Poet and here's why
11th Jun 2018 3:56am