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Days Like This
Is it true what they say
Will tomorrow be brighter
Or mundane like every other damn day,
There is no rhyme or reason
For the thoughts that
Keep me tightly bound
Echoing loudly
Drowning out all other sounds,
Yearning for some peace
Pain consumes me
Crying out for release,
No one hears
The bellows
Or sees my tears,
In silence I sit
Contemplating my world
This messy pile of shit,
Must I keep on going
Or is it time to call it quits!
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Re. Days Like This
7th Jun 2018 6:56pm
full of mystery and the unexpected...keep on writing...see what you conjure up in your imagination to share...help create a better world...we need all the help we can get...
How's that for a bunch of platitudes
enjoy yourself
Lawrence
How's that for a bunch of platitudes
enjoy yourself
Lawrence
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7th Jun 2018 7:38pm
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2018 8:07pm
Oh wow haunted
Like u saw inside me...
And jus spelled out my soul with your words...
Truly gifted u are
Always Autumn
Like u saw inside me...
And jus spelled out my soul with your words...
Truly gifted u are
Always Autumn
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Re. Days Like This
13th Jun 2018 3:01am
Thank you sweet Autumn! Although I’m hoping u don’t have many days like this ;)
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Anonymous
15th Jun 2018 00:49am
Good ink. So powerful and on the spot. I think many can relate. I for one. I feel you. J.
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15th Jun 2018 00:55am
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23rd Jun 2018 00:07am
Great emoting/evoking here ... along with flow and cadence ... really felt all of it
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23rd Jun 2018 1:49am
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24th Jun 2018 4:17am
Looking At Rhyme And Reason ,
There Is Time And There Is Season
There Is Release And Life Pain Cease
The Universe Has Ears That Always Hear
The Calls We Emit , The Candles Lit ,
And The Prayers We Render In Our Surrender
Never Give Up , This Is Your Cup , This Your Grail
This Shall Be Filled You Cannot Fail For That Is Not You
That Is The Mask You Wear Until You Tear It Through And Ask
For Every Need And Let Love Bleed In All You Do !
Well written , Haunted Soul , my friend !
Yet I encourage your walk through any valleys of shadow ,
with no fear , and no retreat !
There Is Time And There Is Season
There Is Release And Life Pain Cease
The Universe Has Ears That Always Hear
The Calls We Emit , The Candles Lit ,
And The Prayers We Render In Our Surrender
Never Give Up , This Is Your Cup , This Your Grail
This Shall Be Filled You Cannot Fail For That Is Not You
That Is The Mask You Wear Until You Tear It Through And Ask
For Every Need And Let Love Bleed In All You Do !
Well written , Haunted Soul , my friend !
Yet I encourage your walk through any valleys of shadow ,
with no fear , and no retreat !
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24th Jun 2018 4:49am
Your words are so full of light
Encouraging me to take flight
They touched my soul!
Thank you my friend.
Encouraging me to take flight
They touched my soul!
Thank you my friend.
Re. Days Like This
26th Jun 2018 5:22pm
keep writing beautiful soul
it is this very pain that paints the most beautiful landscapes..
love Crim
it is this very pain that paints the most beautiful landscapes..
love Crim
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26th Jun 2018 6:35pm
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14th Aug 2018 3:31am
I believe there is a reason for the thoughts that keep you tightly bound. It's called experience. ;-)
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15th Aug 2018 5:21pm