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Long Cold Nights
I embrace egos
Prides deeply insight on me.
Longing on your warm fleecy soul.
Hmmmm.... I need your cozy comfort.
Iceberg swallowed me!
I want to be bold,
Wanted to feel your warmth!
Take your breath in me.
Give thy foolish faith,my dear
I need it in my long cold night
Night makes me weak
I don't want those darkness
I saw red colours of obstacles.
Light my sights on!
Paint my past like rainbows in heaven
As rain vapour with the two of us!
Now, can we be together in my long cold nights?
İMay 2018 Gloriden Cayong Gutierrez
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Prides deeply insight on me.
Longing on your warm fleecy soul.
Hmmmm.... I need your cozy comfort.
Iceberg swallowed me!
I want to be bold,
Wanted to feel your warmth!
Take your breath in me.
Give thy foolish faith,my dear
I need it in my long cold night
Night makes me weak
I don't want those darkness
I saw red colours of obstacles.
Light my sights on!
Paint my past like rainbows in heaven
As rain vapour with the two of us!
Now, can we be together in my long cold nights?
İMay 2018 Gloriden Cayong Gutierrez
All Rights reserve
Published 7th Jun 2018
Author's Note
When I feel so empty and feeling so lonely in times when we arguing each other.
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7th Jun 2018 2:46am
yes keep a hold on him
nights will remain warm
be it cold or storm
rains also
keep him within within
nights will remain warm
be it cold or storm
rains also
keep him within within
7th Jun 2018 2:47am
Yes , Thank you for your comment.
I will love him unconditionally and that is the choice of being a victim of love. :)
Happy Reading !
I will love him unconditionally and that is the choice of being a victim of love. :)
Happy Reading !
7th Jun 2018 3:37am
no not victim
but consider yourself as the winner
he the runner up
alternatively keep coming second and first
but consider yourself as the winner
he the runner up
alternatively keep coming second and first
7th Jun 2018 4:27am
Interesting word usage and choice. Thank you for the piece. It is fantastic.
19th Jun 2018 9:26pm
Your dedication to this man is deep and pure, even if he doesn't appreciate it. That says a lot about your character.
Nice work!
Nice work!
