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this lifes a trap
this isn't life
how is this life
i'm confused
life? a weird twisted joke?
life? a cruel trap
how is this even reality
how is this even a nice world
why should be sitting here in a world which hurts
why should i be sitting here in a world which causes me pain
there is no answer
i just have to , i've had to
theres no other reason to my misery
if people were more considerate
if the universe was more considerate
i would not be sitting here hurting this much
would i ?
a person sitting here , hurting
a victim of the world and peoples stupid ways
how dumb
how is this life
i'm confused
life? a weird twisted joke?
life? a cruel trap
how is this even reality
how is this even a nice world
why should be sitting here in a world which hurts
why should i be sitting here in a world which causes me pain
there is no answer
i just have to , i've had to
theres no other reason to my misery
if people were more considerate
if the universe was more considerate
i would not be sitting here hurting this much
would i ?
a person sitting here , hurting
a victim of the world and peoples stupid ways
how dumb
Published 4th Jun 2018
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2018 3:51pm
Love the line “victim of the world”
Once again you hit the nail right on the head and leave no question of how cruel it all is. Loved this one!!
Once again you hit the nail right on the head and leave no question of how cruel it all is. Loved this one!!
5th Jun 2018 3:56pm
I see that if for no other reason besides your wonderful writings that you may be here just to help others!
and your vulnerability may be what does it?
Hebrews 13:16
and your vulnerability may be what does it?
Hebrews 13:16
5th Jun 2018 8:16pm
I think the bad gets more exposure in the media thus giving off a negative vibe about the world. I recommend travel and personal interaction with those in the world and your view might change.
8th Jun 2018 12:02pm
I felt this one deeply and I agree with what you had to say. Humanity is somewhat inhuman the world as a planet is beautiful - such a good write I really enjoyed this from start to finish :-)))))))
