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Sean's Story
Sean didn’t know that he was broke,
He found out and wanted to croak,
He grabbed some old rope,
Unable to cope,
Closed his eyes, and never awoke.
He found out and wanted to croak,
He grabbed some old rope,
Unable to cope,
Closed his eyes, and never awoke.
Published 2nd Jun 2018
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2nd Jun 2018 9:08pm
2nd Jun 2018 9:17pm
11th Jun 2018 00:17am
I like that you present your tales in limerick form.
It's one of my favorite genres... they are a bit dark... but it works.
Mine aren't always funny, either.
This one wouldn't hurt for having a few words re-arranged... for the sake of better flow. But that's up to you.
It's one of my favorite genres... they are a bit dark... but it works.
Mine aren't always funny, either.
This one wouldn't hurt for having a few words re-arranged... for the sake of better flow. But that's up to you.
