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Doubly Bound With Two Blind Eyes
I'm afraid that I'm unknown.
I'm terrified to become known.
Published 2nd Jun 2018
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That's all really.
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2nd Jun 2018 3:47am
2nd Jun 2018 3:54am
Anonymous
2nd Jun 2018 4:13am
Thought turds shared at point. I love Shit, make beautiful Shit I say..re: my writes. It's fun to play in the sandbox aye?
2nd Jun 2018 4:43am
3rd Jun 2018 4:45pm
It's fckn Hell to be
a brokeheart has-been**
like Me
**who really never-was
a brokeheart has-been**
like Me
**who really never-was
3rd Jun 2018 9:16pm
They say we're more afraid of success than failure . . . this reminds me of that.
Short yet powerful
Short yet powerful
3rd Jun 2018 9:28pm
It really is.
I'm beginning to wonder if it might actually be the minority of us that DON'T struggle that way, instead of the ones that do. There seem to be many relating to this.
At least, I don't feel so alone.
I'm beginning to wonder if it might actually be the minority of us that DON'T struggle that way, instead of the ones that do. There seem to be many relating to this.
At least, I don't feel so alone.
3rd Jun 2018 9:29pm
Anonymous
5th Jun 2018 9:05am
This is the first i've read from you......you accomplished much in so few words....food for thought for sure and revealing. i think many can relate and I gotta say i love the title too :)
All the best
Ben
All the best
Ben
5th Jun 2018 10:13am
13th Jun 2018 2:24am
I have *no* problem , known or unknown...
What I have a problem with is if I do not do
what feels right to me...
How the world reacts , I don't give a fuck...
That is their problem...
If I die unknown in this lifetime...or known...
There will be , and have been others , where
that will be , or has been different...
Do I care ?
No...;)
Nicely written , however , AtoMikbomb !
( like everything you write )
What I have a problem with is if I do not do
what feels right to me...
How the world reacts , I don't give a fuck...
That is their problem...
If I die unknown in this lifetime...or known...
There will be , and have been others , where
that will be , or has been different...
Do I care ?
No...;)
Nicely written , however , AtoMikbomb !
( like everything you write )
13th Jun 2018 7:36am
My poem worked more thought from a fellow poet :) I cannot know, but I appreciate your mind working.
Thank you!
Thank you!
