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Seaside Swell 4
The seaside after dark is not a place
To hang around too long when you're alone;
The moon shines up above and leaves its trace:
The seagulls are quite silent, so the groan
Of tide seems uncontested with its surge;
It's not the only swelling sound on shore;
I lie beneath him now and hear him urge
Me on, while I am begging him for more;
As he looks down at me, he presses on;
His unremitting stirring's like the sea;
He fucks me very hard and very long
Because his need is roused ; he'll only be
Contented when he's done, but now must ride
My crack, 'til cum and sunrise coincide.
To hang around too long when you're alone;
The moon shines up above and leaves its trace:
The seagulls are quite silent, so the groan
Of tide seems uncontested with its surge;
It's not the only swelling sound on shore;
I lie beneath him now and hear him urge
Me on, while I am begging him for more;
As he looks down at me, he presses on;
His unremitting stirring's like the sea;
He fucks me very hard and very long
Because his need is roused ; he'll only be
Contented when he's done, but now must ride
My crack, 'til cum and sunrise coincide.
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Re. Seaside Swell 4
29th May 2018 3:09am
Amazing as your writing always is. I'm always intrigued. It only got better as it was building ...
"His unremitting stirring's like the sea;
He fucks me very hard and very long
Because his need is roused ; he'll only be
Contented when he's done, but now must ride
My crack, 'til cum and sunrise coincide. "
OMG , perfection!!
"His unremitting stirring's like the sea;
He fucks me very hard and very long
Because his need is roused ; he'll only be
Contented when he's done, but now must ride
My crack, 'til cum and sunrise coincide. "
OMG , perfection!!
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30th May 2018 00:34am
I liked the implied pun - crack and crack of dawn - giggles - thank you for sharing your enjoyment
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Anonymous
29th May 2018 3:31am
SO - this is frickin brilliant! All sorts of giddy over here, blushing and clapping hands anxiously...I need to keep this one close of you don’t mind...
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
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Re. Seaside Swell 4
29th May 2018 6:41am
An enjoyable read of a night time consummation of an acquaintance made earlier in the day. Sex on the beach!
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