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Star's Of Blue
Dawn is
winking
thunderous
baritones
his tock my
tick
life's same old
alarm clock
cheek greets
fist
blood dawning
upon the wall
beauty is a dog
I named Boo
aromatic in
cold coffee
shaded hues
stooped yet tall
snot fazed at all
good day Flag
salute eye to
you
a true veteran
sporting star's
of blue
smiling as
swelling
dawn's anew
oh dear, where
are my
manner's
I know...
I know...
it's terrifying but
oh so true
having a mighty
fine memorial day
and you...
winking
thunderous
baritones
his tock my
tick
life's same old
alarm clock
cheek greets
fist
blood dawning
upon the wall
beauty is a dog
I named Boo
aromatic in
cold coffee
shaded hues
stooped yet tall
snot fazed at all
good day Flag
salute eye to
you
a true veteran
sporting star's
of blue
smiling as
swelling
dawn's anew
oh dear, where
are my
manner's
I know...
I know...
it's terrifying but
oh so true
having a mighty
fine memorial day
and you...
Published 28th May 2018
Author's Note
Yes, snot is
gnarly but true
however no
pityfoolushnuss
save it for the
one's six feet
under, for they
truly are so blue...
Pic, courtesy of Pinterest
gnarly but true
however no
pityfoolushnuss
save it for the
one's six feet
under, for they
truly are so blue...
Pic, courtesy of Pinterest
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28th May 2018 5:03pm
beautiful Survivor I love how you've woven
your lovely day throughout this Memorial day poem..
made me smile :)
love Crim
your lovely day throughout this Memorial day poem..
made me smile :)
love Crim
28th May 2018 5:19pm
Hey there Crimson so good to see you grace my page again. Now that's my kind of comment on a post such as this, normally I close off comments for fear of pityfoolushnuss, you see it's personal choice that keeps me in this place. {Shhh...When writing it this morning smile's I too had °~°}
Many many appreciations for your word's which also not only brightened my day but brought out all sorts of smile's lol. Muchly Loved with Mad Mad Respect,
SURVIVOR 👣🚬
Many many appreciations for your word's which also not only brightened my day but brought out all sorts of smile's lol. Muchly Loved with Mad Mad Respect,
SURVIVOR 👣🚬
28th May 2018 6:24pm
Regardless of political beliefs, the troops are people we all should be proud of. Great men and women 😁
Nice to see a poem like this.
Nice to see a poem like this.
28th May 2018 9:00pm
Indeed! This is to all soldier's both of government and abuse! Many appreciations Devil for gracing my page as well as leaving your gift of thoughts. Much love and mad mad respect,
me👣
me👣
29th May 2018 6:11am
A touching tribute for this solemn occasion, enjoy the marriage of playful presentation of more serious themes.
29th May 2018 4:27pm
Hey there you, so good to see you grace my page. Loving your comment, awesome innuendo as well. Many appreciations Daniel, much love,
me
me
