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watercolor emotions
do you feel me
while you lie sleeping
as I enter your thoughts
stirring creativity?
I am the voice
that inspires you to go on another day
when you awaken
you pick up the watercolors
because they are the best expression
of your hauntingly beautiful emotions
the vibrant red
is your love screaming to the world
"please see me
taste my passion
it's flavored uniquely"
the green of your jealousy
and the anger you store
for when you are warring
then powerfully you let it go
your jealously simmers
it's there to back up rage
they are a deadly combo
when finally released
lastly there is blue
because deep down you're sad
that no one comes to visit
because they don't know
where the real you lives
they walk past your entrance everyday
while you sit inside your fortress
lonesome yet afraid
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 27th May 2018
| Edited 28th May 2018
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Re. watercolor emotions
27th May 2018 9:55pm
Re: Re. watercolor emotions
27th May 2018 9:57pm
thank you beautiful Rose
you helped me get in touch with my blue..
I deeply cherish you..
love Crim
you helped me get in touch with my blue..
I deeply cherish you..
love Crim
Re: Re. watercolor emotions
27th May 2018 10:01pm
Re. watercolor emotions
27th May 2018 10:00pm
an insightful glimpse into the creative process...when not making things up the energy flows...very perceptive Brenda...incidentally I feel blue to be a spiritual colour...and my favourite....
every happiness
Lawrence
every happiness
Lawrence
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Re: Re. watercolor emotions
27th May 2018 10:39pm
thank you graciously dearest Lawrence blue is a beautiful representation of emotion :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. watercolor emotions
27th May 2018 11:32pm
Hey Bren
I really enjoyed this... Very nicely put together. The image fits the poem perfectly aswell!
Some suggestions for your critique box if you want them...
S8, L2... I'm sure you have T/O there...
"because deep down [you're] sad"
as in you are?
Then just a suggestion to. the first line of S8 to start it with "lastly". Just because the line above has "finally" and confuses the read.
Must say I really loved this poem. Thank you for the read.
Blue skies at you my friend
Al x
I really enjoyed this... Very nicely put together. The image fits the poem perfectly aswell!
Some suggestions for your critique box if you want them...
S8, L2... I'm sure you have T/O there...
"because deep down [you're] sad"
as in you are?
Then just a suggestion to. the first line of S8 to start it with "lastly". Just because the line above has "finally" and confuses the read.
Must say I really loved this poem. Thank you for the read.
Blue skies at you my friend
Al x
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Re: Re. watercolor emotions
27th May 2018 11:45pm
thank you dearest Al for catching those for me i'm a notorious poster with bad editing skills and frequently don't catch repeat words lol :)
I appreciate you dear friend..
love Brenda
I appreciate you dear friend..
love Brenda
Re. watercolor emotions
28th May 2018 00:46am
Re: Re. watercolor emotions
28th May 2018 1:35am
Re. watercolor emotions
28th May 2018 1:33am
This is magic, Crimsin. I was immediately hooked by the title and carried into a very real feeling. I almost felt if I were reading a letter to myself. Thank you for this write. I could feel every line.
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Re: Re. watercolor emotions
28th May 2018 1:38am
thank you dearest Tender One for showing love and understanding deeply the emotions here..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. watercolor emotions
Anonymous
28th May 2018 4:43am
My love - such a beautiful look into the mind of you...regardless of the somber which encases it...nothing more beautiful then the vulnerability showing - sharing with us, more of your precious heart...truly blessed I feel in being privy to it...
I love you passionately, deeply
Love Taryn xoxo
I love you passionately, deeply
Love Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. watercolor emotions
28th May 2018 4:46am
thank you my love for loving me in all my vulnerability and strengths.. you know where I really live..
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
Re. watercolor emotions
28th May 2018 8:50am
Colors are brilliant inside my guarded tower
but from without, drab and grey and dry
You are absolutely right how so few
will ever see my vibrant secrets
I'm glad YOU have, Crimson
yourself a deep color
Sandman
but from without, drab and grey and dry
You are absolutely right how so few
will ever see my vibrant secrets
I'm glad YOU have, Crimson
yourself a deep color
Sandman
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Re: Re. watercolor emotions
28th May 2018 10:46pm
thank you graciously dearest Sandman so grateful to be one allowed inside your sacred fortress and you mine..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. watercolor emotions
Anonymous
29th May 2018 2:15pm
It's interesting how much more muted our colors are viewed through our words and not seen exactly as the emotion it represents. This is brilliantly expressed and the imagery is spot on, my beautiful Dark Angel. And that last stanza...yeah, that exactly. I love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. watercolor emotions
29th May 2018 6:00pm
thank you beautiful Willow for such a lovely comment you gifted me smiles :)
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda
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4th Jun 2018 1:38am
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4th Jun 2018 1:41am