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Lament
Life path once meant to be
Carefully crafted by fate
Decisions and characters aligned
Selfish schism fissures
Alternate universe diverts
All affected in negative directions
I am the cast off anomaly
hearing the timestream lament
it's lost intention
A mother's burning tears
for what was never meant to be
Published 27th May 2018
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Anonymous
27th May 2018 1:39pm
Deep thoughts here, Sandman. These words ache upon the page.
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
28th May 2018 3:03am
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27th May 2018 4:01pm
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28th May 2018 8:38am
Thank you for your reading and reaction Harleea
The interpretation is always in the reader's mind
but the author's task always to elicit something
Losses we have all felt but in different ways
Sandman
The interpretation is always in the reader's mind
but the author's task always to elicit something
Losses we have all felt but in different ways
Sandman
27th May 2018 8:27pm
dearest Sandman I feel your deep pain here
so skillfully crafted into a write..
you make me ache with this poem
with the emotion and thought behind it..
love Crim
so skillfully crafted into a write..
you make me ache with this poem
with the emotion and thought behind it..
love Crim
28th May 2018 8:39am
