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Our Way The Only Way
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Love is about sharing
Isn't about dictating
& taking
Allowing the voice
of another to have
an opinion as to how
they might like to see
events unfold
Big steps ahead yet feeling
constantly without a say
till no steps taken when
fearful of you
Is this what real
love is all about?
To be afraid of
anothers actions
Knowing your to be
blocked & ignored
If not done their way
What about our way?
Love is about sharing
Isn't about dictating
& taking
Allowing the voice
of another to have
an opinion as to how
they might like to see
events unfold
Big steps ahead yet feeling
constantly without a say
till no steps taken when
fearful of you
Is this what real
love is all about?
To be afraid of
anothers actions
Knowing your to be
blocked & ignored
If not done their way
What about our way?
Published 25th May 2018
Author's Note
Just letting out steam on how it'll probably always be
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26th May 2018 6:32am
26th May 2018 7:21am
Happy that you do crim xD
It's a joint effort of caressing emotions that oft gets forgotten about
It's a joint effort of caressing emotions that oft gets forgotten about
2nd Jun 2018 8:31am
good poem . i like the ending '' what about our way '' unfortunately some people only want it '' their way '' selfish for sure
2nd Jun 2018 5:45pm
