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The Unveiling
I'm at the edge of nowhere
gazing at the eye of nod
it blinks
while keeping in time
with my questions
never answering
just drinking in my queries
in frustration
I cry out to this knowing presence
"please give me some kind of sign"
I wait for a thousand years
inside my questions
with nothing to direct me
I get lost within the nowhere
I see it still watching me
and with it's glare
begging me an answer
"it asks how far will you wander
into the nothing you know naught of?"
in defiance I say
"I will go my way
I'll thank you to stop watching"
the great eye rolls back
and starts to spin
then freezes and begins to play
my entire life
right from the beginning
"he's says look and look close
the answers you seek
were there all along"
"I left giant signs
on the walls of your mind
you just disregarded them"
"so take your time
we have all the time you need
to learn the lessons set before you"
"this is a quest of the universe"
"you will not pass through
to the eternal somewhere
stomping your little feet inside the nowhere"
"I've spoken and let it be recorded
you've been given instruction"
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Re. The Unveiling
Anonymous
24th May 2018 7:39pm
This is so like life to say it's there if you know where to look but give no hints. So we keep covering the same ground looking for the tracks to follow leading out. Brilliant observation, my beautiful Dark Angel. I do so love you :-)
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow

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Re: Re. The Unveiling
24th May 2018 7:41pm
thank you beautiful Willow
apparently there are signs on the walls of my mind..
giant ones lol :)
I love you..
love Brenda
apparently there are signs on the walls of my mind..
giant ones lol :)
I love you..
love Brenda
Re. The Unveiling
24th May 2018 7:41pm
some say Earth is a galactic rehab planet...we all have lessons to learn before re-entering the cosmic family...you are not alone...
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Re: Re. The Unveiling
24th May 2018 7:44pm
thank you dearest Lawrence
for a wonderfully insightful comment..
opening my mind to greater truths..
love Brenda
for a wonderfully insightful comment..
opening my mind to greater truths..
love Brenda
Re. The Unveiling
24th May 2018 8:07pm
Oft the case we're so wrapped in our struggles that we overlook the signs we made & those of others
But you seem to be on the case of catching up on all overlooked
You know the way
Follow your heart to happiness
But you seem to be on the case of catching up on all overlooked
You know the way
Follow your heart to happiness
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Re: Re. The Unveiling
24th May 2018 8:08pm
thank you beautiful Rose
for the deeply loving and insightful comment..
love Crim
for the deeply loving and insightful comment..
love Crim
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24th May 2018 8:13pm
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Re: Re. The Unveiling
24th May 2018 8:37pm
thank you beautiful Melia for such a deeply loving and insightful comment.. you are an ever guiding light..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. The Unveiling
24th May 2018 10:16pm
At least you know the signs are there. Some fail to look, and others don't care. So much wisdom here Crim! I love the quotes and eloquence. Fine work!
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Re: Re. The Unveiling
26th May 2018 5:12pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow yes there is an internal voice that leads me and points them out..
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. The Unveiling
26th May 2018 5:13pm
thank you graciously dearest John for such a beautifully insightful and deep comment..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. The Unveiling
Anonymous
25th May 2018 1:01am
My love, you have encountered powers throughout life which have guided you to be where you are now and they will continue to speak through you and to you...not all of them are good ones and each of us meet with the same dastardly creatures...it is the belief in ourselves which allows us to decipher to truths from falsities...keep doing what you’re doing my love...seek all you know in your truest of heart to be and guiding lights will prevail shining above you always as they do now...
I love you passionately
Xoxo Love Taryn
I love you passionately
Xoxo Love Taryn

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Re: Re. The Unveiling
26th May 2018 5:14pm
thank you my love they do guide I just have to be careful of the ones that would seek to derail me.. I love your vision and thoughts on this write..
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
Re. The Unveiling
26th May 2018 6:07pm
Strange and beautiful! Reminds me of when I said to the psych hospital priest 'I'm rather enjoying my existential crisis, thanks, now go away' :')
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Re: Re. The Unveiling
26th May 2018 6:11pm
thank you graciously beautiful Floralii giggles at your delightful comment :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. The Unveiling
27th May 2018 7:07am
Fortune are you to have gained both an audience and answers
from the typically detached deities of secrets
Hoping you the best with cryptic answers
best left to personal revelations
I'll know you'll comprehend
Sandman
from the typically detached deities of secrets
Hoping you the best with cryptic answers
best left to personal revelations
I'll know you'll comprehend
Sandman
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Re: Re. The Unveiling
27th May 2018 7:29pm
thank you dearest Sandman yes i've always known I was being watched and communicated with for as long as I can remember.. way back to when I took my first steps I was aware.. I hope we all evolve in knowledge on this journey of discovery..
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. The Unveiling
1st Feb 2019 2:46pm
thank you I'm happy I'm connecting with you and others... you seem to see into these happenings perhaps you have experienced them first hand in your own way...once my husband had to hold me down because I was shouting ooh and ahh as my body hurdled through space so fast I thought I word fall apart from the g force I saw all the planets and stars flying by me I would ooh in amazement then and scream like on a space rollercoaster it was so strange...I don't know what brought that to mind but there it is...
I would will that you see but beware once you see you can't not see... most are happily blind but I know you are not one of those...
we will seek truth together...
love Brenda ❤
I would will that you see but beware once you see you can't not see... most are happily blind but I know you are not one of those...
we will seek truth together...
love Brenda ❤
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