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teeth, nails and terror
depravity, incessant and relentless
an all consuming blaze of hunger and passion
the sucking void of compete surrender
it's gaping maw open and salivating
ready to receive the submissive flesh prostrate before it
bound by carnal chains to this writhing mass of senses
choking and screaming in need
absolution lost to a blur of vicious pleasure
tender the hand that paints with bruises
delicate the lash, its poetry written in red
an all consuming blaze of hunger and passion
the sucking void of compete surrender
it's gaping maw open and salivating
ready to receive the submissive flesh prostrate before it
bound by carnal chains to this writhing mass of senses
choking and screaming in need
absolution lost to a blur of vicious pleasure
tender the hand that paints with bruises
delicate the lash, its poetry written in red
Published 17th Oct 2011
| Edited 19th Oct 2011
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27th Jul 2012 9:17pm
Oh do I love it ... gives me goosebumps! Hints ever so delicately about the wicked things I prick my thumb for. Nice Job.
28th Jul 2012 3:21am
28th Jul 2012 3:49am
You're most welcome. For me its not really about poetics, it's about being true and authentic. Sharing your vulnerability and how you suffer this human condition. I find my best work (in my humble opinion) comes when I have a lot of crap to get off my mind.
28th Jul 2012 4:20am
definitely. I find I confront and embrace parts of me that I would otherwise deny exist when I am writing.
