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Without Salt
You look good enough to eat
If indeed we ever meet
you will surely feel the heat
when our souls collide
my sweet
If indeed we ever meet
you will surely feel the heat
when our souls collide
my sweet
Published 23rd May 2018
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24th May 2018 6:03pm
24th May 2018 2:30pm
I just love the title, brilliant.
The way it ties into L1 is genius.
Your rhyme works well here
It's crafted carefully yet not
All in your face.
I can actually imagine this as an internal discussion with self.
Lovely poetry
Thank you for the read
Al
The way it ties into L1 is genius.
Your rhyme works well here
It's crafted carefully yet not
All in your face.
I can actually imagine this as an internal discussion with self.
Lovely poetry
Thank you for the read
Al
24th May 2018 6:03pm
