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I Am a Stargazer
This girl is
The fucking stars,
Galaxies,
Worlds,
Whatever the fuck the Oort Cloud is,
And moons
All rolled into one.
But like the bodies in space,
She lies miles away.
Even if it's only 1,500 miles,
It may as well be 1,500 light years.
I just want her
Here.
Now.
Forever.
The fucking stars,
Galaxies,
Worlds,
Whatever the fuck the Oort Cloud is,
And moons
All rolled into one.
But like the bodies in space,
She lies miles away.
Even if it's only 1,500 miles,
It may as well be 1,500 light years.
I just want her
Here.
Now.
Forever.
Published 23rd May 2018
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23rd May 2018 12:37pm
Nice flow and cadence with this ... so stream of consciousness ... evokes desire ... longing ... well done
23rd May 2018 12:44pm
Your comments are very lovely. :) if you have any criticisms at all, you're more than welcomed to do that as well.
~M
~M
23rd May 2018 5:45pm
23rd May 2018 10:07pm
