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Re. Welcome!
21st May 2018 12:04pm
i remain spellbound most of the times..by your stark words that's such profound in its unsaying saidness...
& this soul in overwhelmed yearns of an uproarious overflow, seems dunn fit in those'remain' 'times' ..juz like the 'age' 'relax' & such statics, except that chaotic~beauteous & often/frev 'nothing'ness that holds all..
#juzme dear Takis..from the art u inspire ..
write on..
& this soul in overwhelmed yearns of an uproarious overflow, seems dunn fit in those'remain' 'times' ..juz like the 'age' 'relax' & such statics, except that chaotic~beauteous & often/frev 'nothing'ness that holds all..
#juzme dear Takis..from the art u inspire ..
write on..
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Re: Re. Welcome!
21st May 2018 12:55pm
And I'm spellbound by your usage of some Deconstructionist (Derridean) concepts and terminology. That's why 'deeply grateful'.
Re. Welcome!
21st May 2018 5:44pm
Re: Re. Welcome!
25th May 2018 6:56pm
Re. Welcome!
22nd May 2018 4:30pm
dearest Takis
would there be such an age
if there is such a time I would welcome it gladly..
you are a powerful mind
always stretching mine to it's limits
with your profound depths..
love Crim
would there be such an age
if there is such a time I would welcome it gladly..
you are a powerful mind
always stretching mine to it's limits
with your profound depths..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Welcome!
25th May 2018 7:01pm
Re. Welcome!
I almost suggested removing "you've got" from L4; however, the descending steps, which enhance the piece greatly, would've been altered.
Well done.
Well done.
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Re: Re. Welcome!
25th May 2018 7:05pm
I struggled with it a bit, but I wanted to emphasize the "nothing" that follows.
Thank you for your honest reading and comment!
Thank you for your honest reading and comment!
Re. Welcome!
Anonymous
29th May 2018 8:31pm
Bravo, Takis!!!!
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