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Ripples
Published 15th May 2018
| Edited 28th Dec 2018
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Anonymous
15th May 2018 6:01pm
David, you are a big, soft-hearted romantic! Bringing me big smiles with this addition to your lovely Nightbird's collection of love poems. Big huge hugs for you both! :-)
...Willow
...Willow
19th May 2018 8:05am
Hugs always taken thankfully as is your friendship :-))))))
Hugest of Hugsssssssss :-))))))))))
Hugest of Hugsssssssss :-))))))))))
17th May 2018 1:16am
I love this; however, would suggest dropping either small or cute, as you're one syllable too many in L1.
19th May 2018 8:06am
19th Jun 2018 8:54pm
